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2022-11-12 23:30

A good start for a fresh novel. Firstly, writing quality is good and it's only going to get better as time goes by. Story development is going well. As for character design, the MC's personality is decent, and as for the other characters, I suppose they're fine too. As for world background, it's well explained but there's still more to be explored. As for the romance factor, we'll get there soon. Overall, this is a good read. I recommend reading this book!

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