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charredcarp
charredcarpLv131yr
2023-02-26 23:33

It's ok. the writing is a bit immature, grammar needs to be worked on. one reason why I like cultivation novels is because there are so many ways for the protag to gain the upper hand vs modern stories where they are 17 and are at the top of 15 careers. however... this novel (5 chapters in) has this chick acting like an OP marysue. there isn't a lot of reasoning for her advancement and ancient divine beast that didn't happen last life. her dad and uncle were stunned at the flaming pull she handed over, but was casually able to buy ten at the market from her allowance her dad gives her... Like I said, it's ok. a few reviews mentioned it's their first time reading cultivation, and that makes sense. this novel isn't bad, but I would compare it to those Chinese manhuas where the FL declares something and no matter how ridiculous it is, it falls in her lap. if you don't want to work your brain, this novel is probably fun to read.

His Highness prince Jin insanely pampered wife

Little_North_Star
4.7
101 Chs

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Little_North_Star
Little_North_StarLv14

This first few chapters are soso but the novel gets better, thank you for reading anyways

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ScarlettRubinovich
ScarlettRubinovichLv15

Yes beginning chapters the grammar is a bit hard to understand. But the story is good. Hope the grammar will get better.

Little_North_Star:This first few chapters are soso but the novel gets better, thank you for reading anyways
1yr
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Little_North_Star
Little_North_StarLv14

Yes the grammer gets better im trying My best to edit the first 20 chapters

ScarlettRubinovich:Yes beginning chapters the grammar is a bit hard to understand. But the story is good. Hope the grammar will get better.
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KiyahLW
KiyahLWLv3

I really like the concept for this novel, from the synopsis I was intrigued. After the first chapter, I was sucked in. The female lead is has an interesting backstory, and I can't wait for more!

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Lu_Shui
Lu_ShuiLv14

Amazing insight in a tier-based cultivation world! Our FL Ye Rushang is back from the dead and returns to exact revenge on all those who dared to stand in her way! Chapters are packed with details that will wow the readers. Definitely worth reading, added to collection! ❤️❤️❤️

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CHVA2001
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Interesting concept and the characters and world background are well described and writing quality is also okay and keep releasing new chapters 👍👍👍

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Little_North_Star
Little_North_StarLv14

Hehe! Why not give a review myself..🤭 so everyone ty for reading and gifting, i definitely recommed by own book! Because its worth the read. Also dont forgeot to check out my other book, Retired playboy feisty wife, my try at modern day romance❤️

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Megan_Immanuella
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I'll recommend the book to readers.I naturally don't like this genre of book but I'll make a huge exception for this one.interesting storyline and the main character is wonderful. Awaiting more chapters! The author has huge potential!

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HairySquid
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I don't really read this type of books but I'm really looking forward to more chapters. It's got a good buildup, characters and a nice concept. 👍👍👍

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Raws!!!! I love This book[img=recommend]

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This book is the best I advise everyone to try it out nothing better than the loveable and smart Ye Rushang

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