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Surge911
Surge911Lv142yr
2022-12-06 13:50

Liking where this story is going so far, and I like that whilst you may have changed his upbringing he is still identifiable Jon snow but also a whole new character in itself. I hope his emotions aren’t stunted with him being inserted and you keep with the flow of how he is as a character.

ASOIAF: Dimensional Chat Group

Servant_Ambrosius
4.1
68 Chs

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toshisero
toshiseroLv4

it was good when he was in planetos but it went s#it afterwards

11mth

Malthaael
MalthaaelLv12

plot is a mess ...... . .........................

4mth
MyEx
MyExLv3

It's good, but to slow man, and you added the members from fiction that I don't know at all, and you decided to bring the targaryen to the story making it to complicated, I'll wait for DCG stuff but in the end it's nothing, chp 24

9mth
The_WheelOfFortune
The_WheelOfFortuneLv4

The fix is very brain dead in terms of plot and the writing quality is decent

4mth
Solomonsquill
SolomonsquillLv4

I am enjoying a lot this story, the characters are realistic, the story is really interesting, and I am enjoying a lot the plot in the GOT. Overall a great read so far, still in chapter 24. Now I will tell you a couple of things that irked me a little and that could make this story even better if done right. First of all, the first chapters are really hard and I dislike that you just casually say the lore of the Mc. I would have loved to have seen pieces of his life little by little and to build his character through a few chapters at the very beginning or even make a prologue of his life. Lastly, the chapter that I am reading currently is a full block of text instead of being divided by paragraphs and it makes the really interesting content lose value due to how hard it is to the eyes. Anyways take this as constructive criticism, I am really enjoying your story and I wish you keep uploading and maintaining the quality. Many thanks author for all your work, hope you have a nice day.

6mth
dark_knight01
dark_knight01Lv4

love the main character and story development . The only flaw is the update speed otherwise it's a good read

9mth
Daoist4g4Z2O
Daoist4g4Z2OLv4

I like 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁 ###################################################################################################################################################################################################################################################################################################

1yr
Deaths_crow
Deaths_crowLv14

the story till chapter 31 so far is good, the pace of the story isn't to fast nor to slow. the grammar could use some work, but it isn't bad. the character development for side characters, could use a bit more development. all and all, it's a good story. I hope the author keeps releasing new chapters and doesn't drop this story.

1yr
_oinkchan
_oinkchanLv5

I like this a lot. .........

1yr
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