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wcpwnsutoLv131yr
2023-02-08 09:40

I enjoy the novel a lot BUT the title is completely miss leading ... The system the MC gets has NOTHING to do with Total war. It has nothing to do with the game Total War Warhammer or the act of declaring war to get stronger. Also it says stuck between DC and Marvel but he is in Warhammer (AU). The story so far has had very little to do with DC and Marvel. The system of his doesn't give him DC and Marvel or Warhammer stuff it gives him anything the Author can think of at that moment. He had 3 BIG worlds to choose from to give the MC rewards but says screw it and gives him things for Dragon Ball Z, random Cultivation Novels, Ben 10 and MORE!! Pick a lane please!! The novel should be called the random missions and rewards with a shop! The consistency of this novel is 0. But other than the lies of the title the novel itself is fine.

Total War System: Stuck between DC and Marvel

Warcry_Ayms
4.3
102 Chs

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Thanks for pointing it out dude, I've been doing my best to figure out how to make the description of the fic fit in the story which I now plan later on. Though I started this due to release some stress but I now genuinely like the time I spent thinking and writing this fanfic. Things are still jumbled up as I plan to make thing fit and not be like some stories where the plot is quite forced upon the readers thus I have also spent time reading other fics to know which do's and don'ts I should follow. Honestly I am not quite adept in terms of writing and grammatical correctness but I will try and find ways to fit the description into the story. Thanks for the review dude...

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wcpwnsuto
wcpwnsutoLv13

I think the biggest issue is the MCs/the stories identity ... is it a mysterious shopkeeper story? ... Is it a conquerors story? ... a cultivation story? ... kingdom building story? ... a System centric story? ... Omniverse travel story? ... right now the story has a little bit of everything I just mentioned and seems to be bouncing around these "tropes" but not fleshing them out at all.

Warcry_Ayms:Thanks for pointing it out dude, I've been doing my best to figure out how to make the description of the fic fit in the story which I now plan later on. Though I started this due to release some stress but I now genuinely like the time I spent thinking and writing this fanfic. Things are still jumbled up as I plan to make thing fit and not be like some stories where the plot is quite forced upon the readers thus I have also spent time reading other fics to know which do's and don'ts I should follow. Honestly I am not quite adept in terms of writing and grammatical correctness but I will try and find ways to fit the description into the story. Thanks for the review dude...
1yr
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Not many warhammer fanfics out there so thank you!

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Just read all the chapters so far and it drew me in this is a great book so far hope you keep writing. Also if you have a update schedule just Curious what it is

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GodOfLight
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You disappointed me, I thought at least by the 50-60th chapter it would be about the universes of Marvel and DC, but it only started 75-80 and then a couple of chapters and that’s it, I wish the author a speedy recovery and I say goodbye to this

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Thelegend002
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salamander_yt
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this has potential keep it up 👍 . p

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Gulf_Alpha_Yankee
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Please continue to update this story and come out with new chapters.

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MorningWood_Dao
MorningWood_DaoLv5

60 chapters in, mc still stuck at Warhammer. some of the 'writing' got worse at about ch 50+, sometimes the pov suddenly change from "he" to "i", and vice versa. other than that, it's an interesting novel to read even for people who don't know about warhammer lore (it's still a bit confusing for me). tho I feels like author didn't make the fanfic with non-warhammer fans in mind.

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muh_name
muh_nameLv12

While it is an overall good story the Marvel/DC aspects fall to the side pretty quickly as does the shopkeeper bits as well that majority of the storytelling is in the Warhammer universe. so is you're interested in the Marvel or DC in the title give this one a pass

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jon_T
jon_TLv2

I thought it was dc and Marvel fic but almost all chapters are warhammer which I do not know....you should put on the tag for that...... ..........

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