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Kazuki190
Kazuki190Lv41yr
2023-01-29 19:49

all in all good no problem and the mc have a realistic mind he know the consequences of hes action and the story it not moving fast and show every detail of the story keep up the good work don't over think of what you what to do with the novel do it

In an Amalgam World as the Master of Death!

LifeIsAJoke
4.3
36 Chs

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Ballad
BalladLv5

The story was interesting, however he's gonna attend Hogwarts for some dumb reason. This guy can literally rip out knowledge from wizards minds and learn everything from Hogwarts lol.

1yr
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RustyBoi
RustyBoiLv4

Author doesn’t even understand the powers he gave his mc. 1) gave him essence of the blank, but he has trouble learning everything in 4 months and has “roadblocks”. 2) gave him Rimuru’s powers, even named Raphael into a Manas, but somehow Manas is extremely nerfed, couldn’t help teach him everything and didn’t even notice the inconsistency of him not being the child who lived yet having a piece of Voldy’s soul, which even i noticed at once 3) gave him a skill named Azathoth that can only work with space-time, and not the normal Azathoth… 4) just to emphasize, he has roadblocks when he has essence of the blank… idk man this had a lot of potential but i couldn’t get past chapter 8 because of this

1yr

The_Dusk_Ninja
The_Dusk_NinjaLv4

Looking forward to where the story moves

1yr
Linus279
Linus279Lv4

Nah it's not that good it makes no sense it's like the Author just wanted strong powers but not an Op Mc

1yr
darknightofAnime
darknightofAnimeLv14

The fanfiction is really truly great and I recommend for others to read it too.

1yr
Uncle_Roger_main
Uncle_Roger_mainLv14

Really loving the book so far! Keep up the creativity!

1yr
Alef_Biersack
Alef_BiersackLv2

First of all this is a crackfic, second it is a system fanfic and third OP MC, which for some reason the author did not put it in the synapse, the story is not good as far as I read it, it could be better later on, but how far reads is the type of story that a superpowered child doesn't like, who sometimes has a child's mind and sometimes an adult's, the story tries to force the family aspect but it wasn't cool, I think the only positive point is the explanation about the abilities that makes it very clear what they do but that hardly has any merit since they are manga protagonist skills and if you're going to use a protagonist's skill the least is to know how it works but I've seen stories of authors who take these skills and don't know how it works that's why I say it has some merit even if very little. I'll try to read some more.

1yr
MythicalFanFicGod
MythicalFanFicGodLv4

It's well-written and highly enjoyable, would definitely recommend.

1yr
Thehighest_throne2
Thehighest_throne2Lv1

maybe for some this fic is not good, but I like this one. mc is not naive, does not follow the tradition of not killing batman, not with Dumbles, even though mc op's strength but he does not act Like a proud young Chinese master. This can be read to fill in the blanks of spare time

1yr
Lizrock
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LifeIsAJoke
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Please share your opinions as much as you can!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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