Author doesn’t even understand the powers he gave his mc. 1) gave him essence of the blank, but he has trouble learning everything in 4 months and has “roadblocks”. 2) gave him Rimuru’s powers, even named Raphael into a Manas, but somehow Manas is extremely nerfed, couldn’t help teach him everything and didn’t even notice the inconsistency of him not being the child who lived yet having a piece of Voldy’s soul, which even i noticed at once 3) gave him a skill named Azathoth that can only work with space-time, and not the normal Azathoth… 4) just to emphasize, he has roadblocks when he has essence of the blank… idk man this had a lot of potential but i couldn’t get past chapter 8 because of this

Looking forward to where the story moves

Nah it's not that good it makes no sense it's like the Author just wanted strong powers but not an Op Mc

Really loving the book so far! Keep up the creativity!

First of all this is a crackfic, second it is a system fanfic and third OP MC, which for some reason the author did not put it in the synapse, the story is not good as far as I read it, it could be better later on, but how far reads is the type of story that a superpowered child doesn't like, who sometimes has a child's mind and sometimes an adult's, the story tries to force the family aspect but it wasn't cool, I think the only positive point is the explanation about the abilities that makes it very clear what they do but that hardly has any merit since they are manga protagonist skills and if you're going to use a protagonist's skill the least is to know how it works but I've seen stories of authors who take these skills and don't know how it works that's why I say it has some merit even if very little. I'll try to read some more.

It's well-written and highly enjoyable, would definitely recommend.

maybe for some this fic is not good, but I like this one. mc is not naive, does not follow the tradition of not killing batman, not with Dumbles, even though mc op's strength but he does not act Like a proud young Chinese master. This can be read to fill in the blanks of spare time

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