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Honest_dude
Honest_dudeLv12yr
2022-11-08 22:48

I have no problems with power system the idea is good would have loved to read how it would develop in future, but why is your writing style so Chinese because mc is too arrogant for no reason , bro just got reincarnated has not faced any Titan yet has not experienced how effective his sharingan is against named Titans , he is talking a lot which is making it all a cringe fest and making it hard to continue reading. Hope this review helps nothing personal

Infinite Worlds: Attack on Titan

SrCuervo
4.5
133 Chs

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SrCuervo
SrCuervoAuthor

Thank you very much for commenting and leaving this review. First of all, it's only a few chapters you're reading and you can't understand for the most part the mc's way of thinking. The main character is not arrogant, his way of looking at the world he is in is focused on making a change, he believes he can contribute something with the power he has and what he knows. He is not arrogant, his confidence will be affected when things start to get out of control, when he gets to the point of not knowing what will happen, you will understand the turning point of the protagonist. The writing style tries to reflect the interaction of the main characters and the mc in this novel, there are reasons why he acts the way he does. His bravery and confidence will lead him into dangerous situations, the writing style is reflecting the scenes of the training arc. The first ten episodes are introductory, I don't think this novel is bad, you are being too harsh considering the novels in general. All in all, the chapters are long, the updates are constant and if you give it a chance to keep reading, once the next arc comes, you will understand everything and understand the mc better. Anyway thanks for reading.

2yr
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Leave this review for 10 days the if he has not deleted it, delete it. You gave enough explanation

SrCuervo:Thank you very much for commenting and leaving this review. First of all, it's only a few chapters you're reading and you can't understand for the most part the mc's way of thinking. The main character is not arrogant, his way of looking at the world he is in is focused on making a change, he believes he can contribute something with the power he has and what he knows. He is not arrogant, his confidence will be affected when things start to get out of control, when he gets to the point of not knowing what will happen, you will understand the turning point of the protagonist. The writing style tries to reflect the interaction of the main characters and the mc in this novel, there are reasons why he acts the way he does. His bravery and confidence will lead him into dangerous situations, the writing style is reflecting the scenes of the training arc. The first ten episodes are introductory, I don't think this novel is bad, you are being too harsh considering the novels in general. All in all, the chapters are long, the updates are constant and if you give it a chance to keep reading, once the next arc comes, you will understand everything and understand the mc better. Anyway thanks for reading.
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Honest_dude
Honest_dudeLv1

I am not trying to be harsh here, i just say what I think. I usually do not comment or leave review because there are a lot of trash out there, but the once i do leave a comment means I think the novel has lot of potential , and i leave my point of view on it. I would love it if you would prove me wrong.

SrCuervo:Thank you very much for commenting and leaving this review. First of all, it's only a few chapters you're reading and you can't understand for the most part the mc's way of thinking. The main character is not arrogant, his way of looking at the world he is in is focused on making a change, he believes he can contribute something with the power he has and what he knows. He is not arrogant, his confidence will be affected when things start to get out of control, when he gets to the point of not knowing what will happen, you will understand the turning point of the protagonist. The writing style tries to reflect the interaction of the main characters and the mc in this novel, there are reasons why he acts the way he does. His bravery and confidence will lead him into dangerous situations, the writing style is reflecting the scenes of the training arc. The first ten episodes are introductory, I don't think this novel is bad, you are being too harsh considering the novels in general. All in all, the chapters are long, the updates are constant and if you give it a chance to keep reading, once the next arc comes, you will understand everything and understand the mc better. Anyway thanks for reading.
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Honest_dude
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Unsightly:Leave this review for 10 days the if he has not deleted it, delete it. You gave enough explanation
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Honest_dude:
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RuberDF
RuberDFLv5

Waoh, aren’t you smart delete comments that you don’t like? how many small minded people like you are in this site?

Unsightly:Leave this review for 10 days the if he has not deleted it, delete it. You gave enough explanation
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Gabichu_Yeah
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Ok Mr president...?

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Genn_stars
Genn_starsLv3

I agree, deleting comments that they don't like is a very -ching chong people- behavior.

RuberDF:Waoh, aren’t you smart delete comments that you don’t like? how many small minded people like you are in this site?
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mow
mowLv4

Alot sadly

RuberDF:Waoh, aren’t you smart delete comments that you don’t like? how many small minded people like you are in this site?
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Jonathan_Lam_2034
Jonathan_Lam_2034Lv4

as a ching chong I fully agree

Genn_stars:I agree, deleting comments that they don't like is a very -ching chong people- behavior.
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Demiurge_Ohara
Demiurge_OharaLv11

lots of bing chilling.

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SrCuervo
SrCuervoAuthor

Hello to all readers of this novel, the story is intended for the protagonist to have great power but great consequences to using it (this is a well developed story). I don't plan to write more than 300k words in this story so after the training arc comes the story straight to the main events. I have several chapters ahead of time in case I get a writer's block on publication, so for those who want to read more of this story you can visit my P_Treon; SrCuervo All the chapters are very large so I will most likely post one a day, thank you all for reading.

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SrCuervo
SrCuervoAuthor

Clarification on the MC's power: He is sent to the world of Attack on Titan with two very interesting characteristics. 1.- He has the Mangekyou Sharingan. Note: Unlike using Chakra, the protagonist loses years of lifespan to make use of the Susanoo. Note2: He can summon any weapon characteristic of a Susanoo. The protagonist can make use of any form of the Susanoo without needing anything, only spending years of life. The eye abilities are balanced, having only the ability to improve vision and make use of any form of a Susanoo. 2.- To be able to make use of Chakra in small proportions. Note: Chakra energy can be used to improve his physique and increase his strength.

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ZoneTail
ZoneTailLv5

Reveal spoiler

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Celestial_Kaiser
Celestial_KaiserLv4

Honestly, the story concept has potential, but then again, the author is adding an anime superpower, and then 'balancing' the abilities for 'realism' is total BS. If you are adding anime power, don't destroy them for the sake of 'realism'. If you want to lower the Sharingan power, just use the concept of the seal. Unlock new abilities of Sharingan as MC levels up. So, it's not my cup of tea.

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Ryughaa
RyughaaLv14

Lets just say as of now I don’t think the mc has even used sussano more than 2 times I hated the way he uses mangeyko he losses his years of his lifespan it was a kinda dumb idea since it put to many restrictions on the MC like out of 100 or so chapters u see it twice I understand we’re he wanted to go with this but I just felt disappointed it wasn’t a bad read but just didn’t like the restrictions on mc

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TAPISLO
TAPISLOLv3

well I hope the MC won't be too much overpowered and struggles a bit in the story , I haven't seen too much aot FF so good luck 🤞 ps: I want historia for love interest

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Immortal_Cat
Immortal_CatLv13

This is just too good! The story is great and updates are stable. So far, there is or are no clear female lead(s) yet, but im guessing it's Sasha based on the picture, not that i'm complaining, adult Sasha's real fine. But personally I'd want Mikasa or Annie.

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NowGoWithTheFlow
NowGoWithTheFlowLv14

Well a book to pass the time. Though I wouldn't recommend investing your time in this book. A fanfic that mc follows cannon an be the side show to all the other characters/cast isn't a fanfic in my opinion an this novel here reflects that. Not many chapters, update are slow. Nerfing Chakra that mc has all the way to drawing out each chapter while making mc perfect in his interactions.

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Arion_Sturmklinge
Arion_SturmklingeLv2

I think it is a very good start The powers are not too strong and the mc was presented believably Grammar is also error-free _________________________

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