The fic would have been much better if the author used a normal guy instead of an old disgusting man . It's a huge turnoff . not everyone has old man fetish , it is a very questionable taste . Every dude giving 5 stars is very weird .

It would be 5 stars if it wasn't a disgusting old man. Please change the looks it is too disgusting to imagine.

Muito bom 😊 eu sempre volto para conferir se o autor atualizou. O MC é um velho tarado com sistema, não é minha primeira vez vendo o tropo bastardo feio em uma fanfic, mas esse foi um dos melhores no quesito, fetiche e R18. Por favor autor não largue!!!

Disgu sting Low Life You Should K ILL Yourself (Contains CLO Ne, Net O Rare, Net O Ra Se) and he doesn't change the Main Character’s appearance even after he got the Blue Silver Emperor’s Inheritance. Man Don’t use some else’s character for something as fil Th Y as this. Contains full blown Y U R I

Disgusting old man makes this story disgusting 🤮 If that’s ehat the author tryin to achieve, you have definitely exceeded your goral🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢

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is this still being updated ? Also it is a good creation although slow/not being updated at all.

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