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Life_sa_Beach
Life_sa_BeachLv42yr
2022-11-12 11:08

The fic would have been much better if the author used a normal guy instead of an old disgusting man . It's a huge turnoff . not everyone has old man fetish , it is a very questionable taste . Every dude giving 5 stars is very weird .

Douluo Dalu: Hentai

Doldman116
4.1
51 Chs

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BFive
BFiveLv4

Hahah🤣 I read it ignoring that part, as if it didn't exist.

2yr
24
DragonkingKyo
DragonkingKyoLv6

I didn't read it because of the clones as I am not into cuck stuff even if it is selfcucking

1yr
12
Trojan_HeartVirus
Trojan_HeartVirusLv2

But the new thing about this fanfic is that the MC is an old bastard, there are a zillion copies of fanfics with normal MC out there.

3mth
1
Death_God_Lin_Yan
Death_God_Lin_YanLv4

honestly I just read the MC as a beautiful old man. Like the one from "My Disciples Are All Great Traitors"

10d
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Tasha_Williams_0673
Tasha_Williams_0673Lv1

It would be 5 stars if it wasn't a disgusting old man. Please change the looks it is too disgusting to imagine.

1yr

Trojan_HeartVirus
Trojan_HeartVirusLv2

Muito bom 😊 eu sempre volto para conferir se o autor atualizou. O MC é um velho tarado com sistema, não é minha primeira vez vendo o tropo bastardo feio em uma fanfic, mas esse foi um dos melhores no quesito, fetiche e R18. Por favor autor não largue!!!

1yr
MOON_LIGHT_5653
MOON_LIGHT_5653Lv1

Disgu sting Low Life You Should K ILL Yourself (Contains CLO Ne, Net O Rare, Net O Ra Se) and he doesn't change the Main Character’s appearance even after he got the Blue Silver Emperor’s Inheritance. Man Don’t use some else’s character for something as fil Th Y as this. Contains full blown Y U R I

1yr
Arthur_ErosGod
Arthur_ErosGodLv4

Disgusting old man makes this story disgusting 🤮 If that’s ehat the author tryin to achieve, you have definitely exceeded your goral🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢

1yr
andika_liauwan
andika_liauwanLv3

best fanfic-----------------------_--------------------------------------------_----_-------------------------------------------------------

2yr
LittleBaron
LittleBaronLv11

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2yr
Who_are_you_
Who_are_you_Lv5

is this still being updated ? Also it is a good creation although slow/not being updated at all.

2yr
i_love_H
i_love_HLv4

good good vary good .............................................. ................. . .... . . ...... ........... .. .... . . .

2yr
Malikim
MalikimLv4

GOOD FANFIC ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

2yr
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