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2024-06-22 01:57

I thought the journeys are going to be boring after a while, but I was wrong, hahah! I love how every "loop" bring a bit more about Cass. We are presented with initial depiction of Cass, which kinda villain-like. But as he went through the loop, the events peeled the layers of who Cass is, bit by bit, and we begin to see someone complex. I also love the concept of shell and how the author doesn't just make these shells as decoration, but instead point out how each shell affect Cass' decision making and mental state. Making the shell practically "alive", unlike most transmigration story where shells are considered dead for good from the get-go. The vast amount of npc in this story is surprising. Some are one dimensional char (pure evil/good), but many are well built enough they are relatable. The world are explained quite well too, with all different settings and all to give reader a sense of the era and society. I do feel weird progression with the sleeping time (did it affect the world's progress?), but that's probably the only glaring thing I feel about the world's workings. As for pacing, despite limited number of pages each arc, the pace was acceptable. I don't feel the loop world's rushed too much to the point there is no time to "take a breath and ruminate prior events". I was surprised even that I find in many cases that I feel that things are wrapped up nicely and I still can feel time and events flow naturally. Writing is good. The author don't use much flowery vocab, but it's not boring either to the point I notice some phrases being repeated over and over. It also contains barely any typos, which helps immersion. 👍

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