This story has the potential to be really good but sadly it needs a lot of work. The characters feel fake as hell or maybe its just because its written badly that I didnt get to understand them better. Needs a major edit because this is really frusterating to read. Grammar is bad and the characters are written poorly as well. Those are my only cons for this novel and I'm too lazy to go into more detail for this review.
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