Review Detail of ApenasAutorSemNome in The Reincarnator's Tavern
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I'm really enjoying this work and wanted to give some "tips" to the author. In the first chapter I almost gave up on the work, because there was a lot of information compacted there, I think it would have been better if you had explained this throughout the chapters, in the protagonist's thoughts and in conversations with the other participants, that way it wouldn't be so boring from reading that pile of information thrown around. I hope it helped you :). (it was translated by Google translator)
The Reincarnator's Tavern
GnomeBob
Liked it!
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ManasCiel:Um, doesn’t it say you CAN skip the first chapter? That’s what I did. And anything “new” from the first chapter is basically new info. He said all the setup in the first chapter incase someone might want to use his idea in the future… so all the info was in one place…
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ManasCielLv14ManasCiel
Then don’t read it all at once. 😆 But seriously, your basically asking for the character building guidelines to be explained in several chapters just to never be used again. 🫤
ApenasAutorSemNome:But I would like to read that information, just not all together, because for ME it gets boring...