I really like sports fanfics, and I thought yours was very well written! But you won't release bonus chapters anymore?????????????????????????

thanks for the chapter! Did you give up on the bonus chapters?

Thanks for the chapter! When are you going to update the bonus chapters?

I only put Yumi for the conversation protagonist, because I thought it had too much description, I wanted the protagonist to show his personality more

Thanks for the feedback, I'm thinking of making him like Inosuke creating his own breath, but it will take time, he will depend a lot on his strength and technique in the beginning

When do you come out of the chapters again?? or fell? (translated by google translator)..........................................................................................

I'm really enjoying the story, but it's a shame it's only updated once a week, and it's slow paced. I hope the author releases more chapters or makes longer chapters to compensate for the slow pace of the story. (Translated by Google Translate)

I didn't understand something in this chapter, how did Ivan manage to find the protagonist if he was running for an hour at his maximum speed? Like the protagonist stopped at a place and Ivan came out of nowhere.

what happened that you weren't posting? (Google translator)

Caiu?........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

Nem o soro de super soldado pode curar a calvície...

But I would like to read that information, just not all together, because for ME it gets boring...

I'm really enjoying this work and wanted to give some "tips" to the author. In the first chapter I almost gave up on the work, because there was a lot of information compacted there, I think it would have been better if you had explained this throughout the chapters, in the protagonist's thoughts and in conversations with the other participants, that way it wouldn't be so boring from reading that pile of information thrown around. I hope it helped you :). (it was translated by Google translator)

There's still one thing I don't understand, can the protagonist in the simulator use the things he won in the simulator itself? And can the protagonist decide how he will behave in the simulator? If the answer is yes, why doesn't he use the simulator, to see several opportunities and if they are safe enough for him to go look for them? (sorry if there are any errors it was translated in google translator)

I'm really enjoying this novel and so far I've read 13 chapters, only one thing is bothering me, it's the protagonist's intention with other characters (which is to say it was almost nil as far as I've read), the characters the protagonist talks to don't seem to have personality, it looks like he's talking to a robot you know? If you better this your work will get even better! (Google translator)

Strength just doesn't solve when it's little!!! (Google translator)

I was even thinking it was cool at first until I reached the dungeon arc, the protagonist did practically EVERYTHING the same as the other did in the novel, traps, strategies, skills, if I wanted to read a copy I would go to the novel not to a fanfic. HE EVEN TAKEN THE SAME MISSIONS!!! (Google translator)

Crocodile was used by Oda to show that akumas no mi have weaknesses, but he is very strong, he has already faced Whitebeard and left alive and now he has a reward of more than 1,900,000,000 berry, even with his weakness I think that it would be impossible for Luffy to defeat him, after all he is in a desert, so it would be really cool if you leave him with his "true" strength, it would be a big shock for the protagonist and make him see that it's not a manga but life "real". Besides, it would be a good way for one of his servants to do the first battle (google translator)

Cada vez que sai um capítulo novo eu me encho de alegria

Finalmente voltou... tava morrendo de saudade [img=recommend]