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Yuri_is_NtrLv51yr
2024-03-22 15:35

I mean, it is pointless smut. But at least it's was fun. Somehow in a middle, author get this weird idea that mc needs to grind and take seriously quests... The guy who can kill everything. Okay, whatever. Then he become bored and just skip Arifureta conclusion. Sure,fine. And then everything return to debauchery. So yeah, don't know what to say... At least you tried?

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SentToOblivion
SentToOblivionAuthor

I didn’t try, thats the point😭

Yuri_is_Ntr
Yuri_is_NtrLv5

no-no, if you didn't try. you wouldn't waste so many times trying to conquer dungeon properly and fight ehito fairly. You did drop later hard. But you did write all of this useless stuff...

SentToOblivion:I didn’t try, thats the point😭
SentToOblivion
SentToOblivionAuthor

The small bits of plot are to just not let it fall to that level of trash. It’s not really an actual effort at a good story.

Yuri_is_Ntr:no-no, if you didn't try. you wouldn't waste so many times trying to conquer dungeon properly and fight ehito fairly. You did drop later hard. But you did write all of this useless stuff...
Yuri_is_Ntr
Yuri_is_NtrLv5

I was mostly confused by it, like was you trying to copy original or just doesn't know what to write?

SentToOblivion:The small bits of plot are to just not let it fall to that level of trash. It’s not really an actual effort at a good story.
SentToOblivion
SentToOblivionAuthor

Wait were u confused about why some fights were taken seriously? If thats the case then I’ll just say they were semi-supposed to be. He wasn’t using his power on any and everything because thats boring, and thats legit the entire point of the fic. Fighting is fun🤷‍♂️

Yuri_is_Ntr:I was mostly confused by it, like was you trying to copy original or just doesn't know what to write?
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