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Pythia
PythiaLv111yr
2023-02-17 06:11

Author uses no sense of logic or reason to a characters traits or development. No women with any self respect, especially one as indepdent, would accept her boyfriend cheating on her… I suggest going outside and talking to real people.

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AzizahPutri
AzizahPutriLv2

Ikr i though that's why the original s*ck and toxic environment because Kazuya didn't have any backbone to chose one and ghosting the other

PH_ZillA
PH_ZillALv1

You know you're talking to a harem FF right?. You should try reading many harem novel most all of them don't really follow the common sense and logic specially on getting girls. Well, when it comes to modern society it might be hard to accept well it's true. But if you know this is a Harem novel you must also expected this to happen.

Pythia
PythiaLv11

I refuse to listen to a boy that has never felt the touch of a woman. Be better, it's a sad sight to see.

PH_ZillA:You know you're talking to a harem FF right?. You should try reading many harem novel most all of them don't really follow the common sense and logic specially on getting girls. Well, when it comes to modern society it might be hard to accept well it's true. But if you know this is a Harem novel you must also expected this to happen.
PH_ZillA
PH_ZillALv1

Are you talking to yourself? My condolence.

Pythia:I refuse to listen to a boy that has never felt the touch of a woman. Be better, it's a sad sight to see.
Pythia
PythiaLv11

You can't even form a proper sentence, perhaps education before taking your first daunting step in talking to a woman.

PH_ZillA:Are you talking to yourself? My condolence.
Zzz_808
Zzz_808Lv3

You look more confused looking for logic in anime Harem, pretending to be experienced with women when who knows you're just a b Talking through the screen

Pythia:You can't even form a proper sentence, perhaps education before taking your first daunting step in talking to a woman.
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Rida_Alowaid
Rida_AlowaidLv1

🔥🔥🔥🔥

Zzz_808:You look more confused looking for logic in anime Harem, pretending to be experienced with women when who knows you're just a b Talking through the screen
Zzz_808
Zzz_808Lv3

Dude you responding to idiots is pointless

PH_ZillA:Are you talking to yourself? My condolence.
Abyssal_Muse
Abyssal_MuseLv11

why do people take this so seriously? it's a fanfic not some higher than life novel for random nobodies to critique and waste time on if you don't like the material, you can just leave and read something else not like people force you to be here

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