Review Detail of SkyNeves in Reincarnated as Severus snape

Hi to new and old readers, you too author. So before I start this review let me point out my rating system (actually I think everyone who reviews uses the same system but for those who don't know here it is): 1Star-Bad 2Stars-Its not that bad/It's decent 3Stars-Normal 4Stars-Good 5Stars-Awesome So with that out of the way belts go to the review. [Ranking] 1- Writing Quality: The writing quality is meh(not so bad) as in it's readable but it's not good. The way the dialogue is presented is annoying for me and there are lots of mistakes which leads me to believe that English is not the author's main language (It's not mine at least, it's actually my third). Here's an example of the dialogue sometimes: ???:"Wassup my nnnnnigerian friend." or: Megan Fox said,"Noice." those are just few examples of the dialogue and that's excluding grammar mistakes. [2 Stars Here] 2- Story Development: Well... the author has a plot in mind, if it's gonna end up good I don't know but it's interesting enough if you can ignore point #1 but the relationship development and some facts are forced and plot progression is not that great. [3 Stars Here] 4- Character Design: I don't even know how to classify this. I want to give it 1 star but I can't. I'll just point out that Severus ends up looking Korean(Got no problem with Koreans, they hot ASF but making a British guy look Korean is like making a Russian suddenly look Mexican) [2 Stars Here] 4- Updating Stability: It's stable... I think? I added it and caught up in a day so can't say. [4 Stars Here] 5- World Background: Some scenes have details and we get a general knowledge since it's HP world but there is added content since we see new places... But most of the places aren't as detailed as they could to paint a picture for the reader. [3 Stars Here] [Overall: 2.8] My opinion is that the author should find someone to proof read his content before posting or using those platforms like grammarly (I think that's the name). Also add the correct tags because some are missing and it could be hard for those who are looking for it or it could be bad for those who don't want a particular tag like #system and #harem both of which aren't tagged as of now and some people don't like Harems like the No-Harem Sect. I honestly could care less if it has it or not as long as it's done well but in this book it was forced and rushed so yeah... Anyway this is the first real review of the book without all those "It's the best story ever", "more more more more more...", and all those superficial reviews.