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2022-11-09 16:15

imo it could be better. with the way the plot is going it would be just like og greek mythology with just a little better zeus mc. Dialogue interactions are lacking and MC is pretty boring so far. little to no grammar mistakes ill give it that. all in all best wishes author, keep going.

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