Review Detail of nebula in MMORPG: Rise of the Primordial Godsmith
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Disclaimer- review made at chapter 200 Pretty good so far. Doesn't excel at anything in particular, but very solid in every aspect. writing quality: 4* Good. I mean, there's not much more to say. No glaring issues, decent VSPaG. Not mind-blowing enough for 5 stars, but more than enough for a Webnovel. Story development: 4* Excellent so far. Relatively slow paced, but always interesting and has an overarching plot that is starting to come into play now. Character design: 4* This is a weird one. Sometimes the characters are weird and behave slightly awkwardly compared to previously, while other times I (mentally) squeal in delight due to a surprising but great decision to add a new dimension to a character or give them a closure that they need in a story like this. Overall though, the reason the book scores well despite its inconsistencies is the linking of characters we met previously with new plot points, which works superbly. The obvious example is the MC discovering his new body's past, but other examples include the village leader and the dungeon, as well as one of the MC's quests with the first person he meets after his "reincarnation". updating stability: 5* Honestly just great. I give big props to anyone that can consistently release a chapter a day every day of the week, and doubling that just impresses me further. World background: 4* This is 4* due to the story still being in its nascent stages. What we have seen so far is pretty standard, but interesting nonetheless. We have the growing village, the nearby biomes and other villages leading to a few larger towns, and then a capital city further away with currently unknown expanses on the way. Politically, we know of the crown and the larger families plus a small insight into some of their allies and enemies. At the moment, the monsters are quite underdeveloped background-wise, to the point some readers questioned the morality of killing them, but I at least trust the author has a plan in this aspect. Overall, great read, and I recommend it so far if this genre is your sort of thing. I will try to answer any questions people may have if I see them, and sorry if my review seems too surface-level; in actuality I'm mainly doing this to get to 10 reviews for level for of the comment badge.
MMORPG: Rise of the Primordial Godsmith
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Sorry this took so long, I saw your message but then forgot about it. At the moment, no, although he has looked at a few that other people have and I think(can't quite remember) that he hinted at going for a really good one in the future. That said I am like 5 chapters behind so for all I know he could have one, I would just doubt it.
Deaps:Is mc gonna have a 2nd class for fighting etc or just op items and blacksmith class? Is there Race changes ingame later?
He does have really good items though. As for the race changes, I'm pretty sure he mentioned them but he said he wanted to stay human. Also when reaching certain levels of power they get unsealed or smthn, it's related to past humans being super strong I think. There's 9 of them if I recall and MC has gotten the first one. It's basically just a stat increase across the board. But yeah, if you count that as a race change then yeah.
nebula:Sorry this took so long, I saw your message but then forgot about it. At the moment, no, although he has looked at a few that other people have and I think(can't quite remember) that he hinted at going for a really good one in the future. That said I am like 5 chapters behind so for all I know he could have one, I would just doubt it.
Does the author give more background Information about his previous life somewhen? In the first chapter it's mentioned that he drifted in space before dying and in the synopsis is some talk about earth being destroyed, but nowhere is stated why/how or something. It's especially confusing for me cause in the first chapter is mentioned that the Company who developed the game are the "Bad guys" and they made people into "Zombies who basically only play the game". But how does that lead to the earth exploding and him floating in space?
No clue. All the MC says is something about how he could have helped in the fight against them if he had done something sooner. We don't really know anything about the company itself yet because the story is more focused on building a story in the game at the moment, even more so than actually making the MC stronger.
wateiwaz:Does the author give more background Information about his previous life somewhen? In the first chapter it's mentioned that he drifted in space before dying and in the synopsis is some talk about earth being destroyed, but nowhere is stated why/how or something. It's especially confusing for me cause in the first chapter is mentioned that the Company who developed the game are the "Bad guys" and they made people into "Zombies who basically only play the game". But how does that lead to the earth exploding and him floating in space?
Nothing yet I think.That said, we do know there was a war or at least a big fight if some kind, and we can assume that something happened and people got powers in the real world (unless the game world is also called Earth) for that to happen. I'm assuming that it was in that big fight/war that Earth was destroyed and the MC died.
wateiwaz:Does the author give more background Information about his previous life somewhen? In the first chapter it's mentioned that he drifted in space before dying and in the synopsis is some talk about earth being destroyed, but nowhere is stated why/how or something. It's especially confusing for me cause in the first chapter is mentioned that the Company who developed the game are the "Bad guys" and they made people into "Zombies who basically only play the game". But how does that lead to the earth exploding and him floating in space?
For those that see this afterwards, it's been a few months since this thread started, and the MC now has a subclass, which he is currently working on upgrading, and yes it is battle-oriented
nebula:Sorry this took so long, I saw your message but then forgot about it. At the moment, no, although he has looked at a few that other people have and I think(can't quite remember) that he hinted at going for a really good one in the future. That said I am like 5 chapters behind so for all I know he could have one, I would just doubt it.
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No problem, I'd be happy to answer. The MC does get reincarnated into the game, but the real world still exists outside of the game (one of the plot points later in the story is when beta starts and a few players join the game for a short while). So, he does indeed think about the real world. The only problem here is a bit of a plot hole; the MC I'm quite sure has access to the internet, something most NPC's don't, but this hasn't been mentioned in hundreds of chapters now so it seems to have been forgotten about. Maybe that's what other people were referring to?
Knight_Noctis:I apologize in advance for the inconvenience but i have to ask you about few reviews i found. Those review said that despite mc reincarnating into the game he still cares for earth all the time which doesn't makes sense . Does this issue really happen ???