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The_Puffer
The_PufferLv141yr
2022-12-23 13:12

The best cyberpunk fanfic I have read. Thanks to author, whenever I listen to 'heat waves', this story will Come to my mind. My only problem is sometimes things get a little too fiction if you get what I mean. Like water breathing ect.

Cyberpunk: Arasaka Secret Son

Jhunior_ll
4.7
158 Chs

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Jhunior_ll
Jhunior_llAuthor

thanks for your review, about the breathing thing.... I thought it was fun to put, but I'm not going to emphasize too much with the breathing either.

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The_Puffer
The_PufferLv14

It was kinda cool at first but after the grandparents' conversation about legends about it ect, it became not so good anymore.

Jhunior_ll:thanks for your review, about the breathing thing.... I thought it was fun to put, but I'm not going to emphasize too much with the breathing either.
1yr
Jhunior_ll
Jhunior_llAuthor

I thought it would be nice to say that they were the descendants of that world....

The_Puffer:It was kinda cool at first but after the grandparents' conversation about legends about it ect, it became not so good anymore.
1yr
The_Puffer
The_PufferLv14

The idea was good. But the execution reminded me of chinese novels. Like "Oh is that the legendary pill refining technique only our ancestors could do?!" "Impossible! Even the sect leader couldn't do it! How is it possible!" "he must be a genius!" "Maybe he did it thanks to his heaven defying physique" "No. One of the sect elders had that in the past but even he couldnt do it. It must be Because his undying will and love towards life!"

Jhunior_ll:I thought it would be nice to say that they were the descendants of that world....
1yr
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Jhunior_ll
Jhunior_llAuthor

Sora has not taken it out of nowhere, if the only genuine thing has been able to copy it, having felt it from the inside as it is done, the one who rebuilt that lost fencing was the AI inside Sora.

The_Puffer:The idea was good. But the execution reminded me of chinese novels. Like "Oh is that the legendary pill refining technique only our ancestors could do?!" "Impossible! Even the sect leader couldn't do it! How is it possible!" "he must be a genius!" "Maybe he did it thanks to his heaven defying physique" "No. One of the sect elders had that in the past but even he couldnt do it. It must be Because his undying will and love towards life!"
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ZJAY_1
ZJAY_1Lv14

The story has now hit 20 chaps so I can make a review now. If you came here expecting action every chapter turn around cause it's not for you. The story has a more slice of life feel to it. It's very comedic and will provide you with a good laugh. Anyone that knows about cyberpunk knows this story will have some action cause it's Night City. "City of dreams... City of gang gang gang gang" Sorry had to mention the song Gr4ves cause it fits Night City so much. Back to the review ill try to shorten my thoughts. Mc is a character that doesn't fear death cause he experienced a fate worse than death. We already have a live interest from the game that Mc is childhood friends with. The author did it in a way that does not go against her character but also kept her from pitching for the other team. There are other things I would like to say but I would like this review stay under the 1000 characters. So yeah my review. Also I would love for this to update everyday but I can't be talking.

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The_Fool_170197
The_Fool_170197Lv15

Well worth the read as it takes a rather unique approach to the cyberpunk universe and is done in such a way that you can’t wait till the next chapter drops

2yr
Lucky_Rob
Lucky_RobLv2

This isn't a good fanfiction - it's a GREAT fanfiction! Everything is on point from the writing to the characters to the comedy and romance. Well done.

2yr
MeepsNewGroove
MeepsNewGrooveLv4

Harem or no harem? A lot of authors are starting to make their books a harem book without adding the harem tag because “they didnt know if it would be added”. Please tell me here if it is or not

2yr
poposwitch
poposwitchLv2

Is a good story, but it's running by author not following the rule of "show don't tell". The story is basically 110% telling... If author tries to reduce his word count by 60% (i.e. conversely their words with the least number of words & put together in the most impactful fashion possible) it would turn this good story into a great one. Significant majority of the story is burdened by unnecessary words and sentences.

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SomethingMalefic
SomethingMaleficLv2

love it. in the latest 2 chapters especially. I was listening to thr same music they were. wq: 5 sd: 5 cd: 100 us: 5 wb: 5

2yr
Jhunior_ll
Jhunior_llAuthor

if you like it, please write a good review. be a good Choom like MeepsNewGroove and Drakion

2yr
Drakion
DrakionLv5

I like it, nice work. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

2yr
GaZe_Zero
GaZe_ZeroLv2

Probably my favorite cyberpunk fic so far. Really good details, and author doesn’t skimp at all with the background. Props to him as writing background info and details for a game world so big is very difficult. Has a good plot and is just generally top tier as it has nothing unrealistic or bad to it. Only tip I would give for the author is to work on describing the characters looks a little more. Good stuff.

2yr
Kickedelm0
Kickedelm0Lv5

Nice idea for story and everything. But there i can't put a finger on what, but this story can't keep me engage to keep reading it. I don't know what but this is second story like that i have found.

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