Review Detail of ManasCiel in Hero's Villainous Quirk
Review detail
WQ 4/5: It is good, few mistakes, but definitely readable. Though the author might want to state when POV change. (Example: -Mc Pov- or -3rd person pov-) US 5/5: Just read all of it so no idea. (6 chapters.) SD 4/5: It’s gets through the early stuff pretty fast. CD 4/5: Don’t know a lot about his character yet… only 6 chapters are out. WB 5/5: It’s a ff… it already has a built world. Overall 4.4/5 not bad, worth a try… again, this review was made with only 6 chapters to go off of, so take it as you may. Keep up the good work author. Mc’s quirk spoiler below… 😒 Mc’s quirk is Nightmare… lazer… breeze… hand thing…? 😅
Hero's Villainous Quirk
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Very confusing, I must admit... It'll get more in depth the further I get... so hold on, I guess. And yes, it is the first thing. A beam that causes fear, nightmares, etc. :)
DongLong:Like shoots a beam that causes nightmares? Or control something like scarcrows gas but as an energy?
DongLong:Like shoots a beam that causes nightmares? Or control something like scarcrows gas but as an energy?
Oh, I see now. Mine was posted first you can tell by clicking the “newest” tab, and scrolling to the bottom. They just copied and pasted, then changed the numbers. 🫤 (Ps. I looked at their profile, it looks like they don’t speak English…) (lol) Mine was first but-
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