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  • carrotpie
    carrotpie4mth
    Commented

    Hah

    Typical girls. What a waste for a career. 
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    Pokemon - Solo's Strange Journey
    Video Games · BenisBoy14
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  • carrotpie
    carrotpie4mth
    Replied to ZJAY_1
    These were the gazes of admiration in their eyes, ignoring them, he went to the window side last desk and sat down.
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    DxD: My New Life as Motohama
    Anime & Comics · OPELER
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  • carrotpie
    carrotpie4mth
    Posted

    Plot holes and bad writing,

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    DxD: My New Life as Motohama
    Anime & Comics · OPELER
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  • carrotpie
    carrotpie4mth
    Replied to ImpishWolf

    It’s called bad writing 👍

    These were the gazes of admiration in their eyes, ignoring them, he went to the window side last desk and sat down.
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    DxD: My New Life as Motohama
    Anime & Comics · OPELER
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  • carrotpie
    carrotpie4mth
    Replied to DaoistatnnJf
    "Then do it already, You got only 10 minutes left before your academy gets started. I have kept your breakfast on the dining table, finish it all or I will finish you off when I return from the office and don't forget to lock the house before leaving…" saying all that in a single breath, his mom left in a hurry.
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    DxD: My New Life as Motohama
    Anime & Comics · OPELER
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  • carrotpie
    carrotpie4mth
    Commented

    Kinda blocky dialogue

    "So that's how it is."
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    DxD: My New Life as Motohama
    Anime & Comics · OPELER
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  • carrotpie
    carrotpie4mth
    Commented

    Well this is depressing

    Takeshita herself slowly blinks and takes almost five seconds to truly recognise her grandfather... Unfortunately, the damage she'd sustained in the attack had left her speech slurred, if she even managed to put together a comprehensible sentence... For all intents and purposes, the girl had been reduced to someone with a mental capacity half her age.
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    Where the hell am I, and is that a Kaiju!?
    Book&Literature · Niggross
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  • carrotpie
    carrotpie4mth
    Commented

    Maybe cut out the spaces with the gang name, then you could keep the rest of the tattoo ?

    I idly rub my arm which'd already completely healed as I make my way into the dojo hall. I had to admit the tattoo was nicely done, but the glaring ABB marks and labels left a bad taste in my mouth. The only good thing about it was the fact it completely covered up my Case 53 tattoo, though, my current monstrous form made it obvious enough already.
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    Where the hell am I, and is that a Kaiju!?
    Book&Literature · Niggross
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  • carrotpie
    carrotpie4mth
    Commented

    Oh god dammǐt

    Unfortunately, that's where my appreciation for the changes ended. Atop my head and at my coccyx were appendages that didn't belong to regular humans. Perky white cat ears that unconsciously twitched when I paid attention to them, as if nervous under my focus. They were fluffy and still somewhat damp from the shower, they even had balls of fluff around the interior, preventing moisture from entering the ear canal.
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    Where the hell am I, and is that a Kaiju!?
    Book&Literature · Niggross
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  • carrotpie
    carrotpie4mth
    Commented

    Maybe he’s working with the organization

    ...
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    Where the hell am I, and is that a Kaiju!?
    Book&Literature · Niggross
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  • carrotpie
    carrotpie4mth
    Replied to Burusaki
    "Be a good boy."
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    Where the hell am I, and is that a Kaiju!?
    Book&Literature · Niggross
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  • carrotpie
    carrotpie4mth
    Commented
    Trump
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    Where the hell am I, and is that a Kaiju!?
    Book&Literature · Niggross
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  • carrotpie
    carrotpie4mth
    Replied to The_man_The_myth
    Gale didn't waste a moment. He had already taken steps to mask their tracks in the snow. "I've already taken care of our tracks... get to cover," He encouraged, following his own advice. 
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    Winter's (GOT) Nothing on Me
    TV · Wicked132
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  • carrotpie
    carrotpie4mth
    Commented

    Atleast it ended 👍 congrats on the first 7/8 of the book .

    The end.
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    The Average DC Experience (COMPLETED)
    Anime & Comics · Wicked132
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  • carrotpie
    carrotpie4mth
    Commented

    Mc can literly change that easily with his powers

    Emma, who possessed no superhuman powers due to a freak accident, offered Grayson a sense of normalcy and a reminder of the simple joys in life as he helped her to gain her powers.
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    The Average DC Experience (COMPLETED)
    Anime & Comics · Wicked132
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  • carrotpie
    carrotpie4mth
    Commented
    "Now we're talking, pal. Let's get this party started...!"
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    The Average DC Experience (COMPLETED)
    Anime & Comics · Wicked132
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  • carrotpie
    carrotpie4mth
    Commented

    He should get a book to write down his dreams

    It didn't have to mean anything. It might be a vision of a very distant future, it might have been a vision of the past, it might just be a remote possibility that wormed its way into his dreams. It didn't even have to be a real fire or even an attack. Not all visions were literal images of the future. That was the curse of seers; interpreting the visions was far more challenging than receiving them.
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    Enchanting Melodies (HP SI)
    Book&Literature · athass_prkr
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  • carrotpie
    carrotpie4mth
    Replied to i_dont_know_if_he

    You keep telling yourself that buddy

    Momoto was smiling brightly as he spoke with the male version of the frog girl, Kai having trouble recalling her last name, and he wasn't quite sure if his first name was different in this world as other characters were. He was short, shorter than his female canon counterpart, and had the same green hair in a bowl cut with a single spike resting down the middle of his forehead. His eyes were still as uncanny as well, with a wide smile as he brought a ginger up and poked his chin.
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    My Hero Academia Reborn: World 63
    Anime & Comics · RedWarren
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  • carrotpie
    carrotpie4mth
    Replied to RedWarren
    A short girl, with purple balls for hair with three on each side as if in pigtails, had a face currently flushed as she looked up at them.
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    My Hero Academia Reborn: World 63
    Anime & Comics · RedWarren
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  • carrotpie
    carrotpie4mth
    Commented

    This is a little….. unrealistic

    "I know about the way you look at heroes in active duty with judgemental eyes, knowing they could do better, I know you care little about looks, seeing as you never once seemed to notice my body or try to wiggle your way through hoops to have it. I k-know that I want my first time to be with you."
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    My Hero Academia Reborn: World 63
    Anime & Comics · RedWarren
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