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The character interactions are exceedingly fluid. writing style was easy to read and focus on. Although early on, best part was the character accuracy. it felt like they were truly intelligent and acted like in the actual overlord.

The concept is interesting at first, but the more you think about it, the more you realize that the "MC" won't be able to do much, since he has to act as momonga's subordinate for being a supreme being, and he can't act freely, Because it's not in his "programming", unless he gets stronger and is able to eliminate momonga or divide nazarick in two, otherwise, he will always be like a caged bird, that's my opinion. It would have been different if the MC was also a player, either from nazarick or created his own super powerful guild, or was someone who helped develop the game and has special access like new races, doing things +18, don't have level limit, world class items, etc, but on the condition that you can't participate in various game events and PVP, or you don't care about those game things and enjoy the games in other ways.

more please no one ever makes any overlord storys and more 😞

Looking at the frequency of chapter updates, I knew this Overlord fic would be just like the others. They'll never finish it and will only leave readers disappointed when they've loved the book.

Mc doesnt hates albedo! Dont trust other reviews. He is just trying not to get hanged because they can think he has been mind controlled or something else. He tries to act like he hates her while trying to smooth things out for a proper character change so they wont get suspicious.

An OC in an Overlord fanfic as an NPC would have been a little interesting but the MC just felt a little fanboyish especially when he saw Momonga. In terms of his relationship with Albedo, it was funny at the start with them being married but there wasn't anything that made it interesting except for his anger which just came out of nowhere. Its moarly because of ghe MC's personality that i didn't like.

I like it quite a lot, there isnt a specific thing that shines to me in this fic other than me liking npc type of stories, but it is an overlord fic and I'm happy with it

this is bad author hates albedo with passion

It's good so far, but it's only 10 chapters, 8 technically.. I wish the author updated more or mass released...