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Garland
GarlandLv42yr
2022-11-17 20:45

An OC in an Overlord fanfic as an NPC would have been a little interesting but the MC just felt a little fanboyish especially when he saw Momonga. In terms of his relationship with Albedo, it was funny at the start with them being married but there wasn't anything that made it interesting except for his anger which just came out of nowhere. Its moarly because of ghe MC's personality that i didn't like.

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DespairHope
DespairHopeLv5

okay maybe he's a simp but he's not that fanboyish

JokerHighJack
JokerHighJackLv10

I feel like you didn’t realy read the chapters if you think this

Kotaku
KotakuLv4

you commented that too soon later it is shown that this was him adapting and trying not to draw attention looking like he is just another npc who blindly believes momonga of intimidation that make him seem scarier than he already is

Touji_san
Touji_sanLv4

Ehh, I think you read a different fanfic than me. I didn't see any behavior like that in him.

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