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Novel_Guru
Novel_GuruLv42yr
2022-11-13 20:18

gud read 👍👌👌 this Db ff has a rythm to it, this really makes this fun to read.. I really like vegeta in recent chaps..

Into the Anime World- Dragon Ball

mrCat
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mrCat
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Thanks for the feedback but i won't put the blame on people for dropping it early as i am trying something new, where we could have drama also in the Fan-fiction novels to make the characters and their whole story feel more alive and be more one with the characters. Also, I have done some huge grammatical mistakes so... Thanks for the review, love YOU

2yr
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Chaddts
ChaddtsLv1

Written in English, yet not localized at all. So we get people being called by their family name when this is supposed to be in English using English language patterns. This is a small but annoying detail. The English itself is not bad and plenty serviceable. My only issue with the book is the m.c and their 1 personality, and 2 decisions. The author is afraid to make any changes and it shows. He pretends to be vegeta to keep the story as is. This is irredeemable in my eyes. There are dozens of options that could easily work ,yet he makes the decision to play the part of vegeta. It seems the author is unable to go off the rails of the original story and, is making excuses for why the m.c acts the way they do. The author already skipped over vegeta's childhood by putting him into a grown vegeta's body which is obviouslya red flag of them being unable to write anything original at all. My biggest complaint is vegeta not even attempting to contact king kai while he is in his space pod. He could easily make contact due to knowing that king kai is keeping on eye on their arrival ,and he could talk to king kai in private and explain the situation that way, allowing for a far greater flexibility in the story. The way the story is from the forst few chapters show how much the author is trying hard at making up reasons for things to happen as they do. If you read this be prepared to be annoyed by a dumb m.c

2yr

Fito
FitoLv5

well the story has a good start but it does not follow any new story, the story remains almost the same, the only thing that changes is the mc training all the time and creating new techniques while showing how powerful he is and that he will be the strongest in the world universe, there is almost no more development than that, if you like battles and training maybe you will find something interesting.

2yr
Geraint124x
Geraint124xLv5

Reveal spoiler

2yr
Laughing_Tobi
Laughing_TobiLv11

It is all good and fine to read if you don't mind the mc losing half the time and others getting the power level of mc in like one transformation. There are also unnecessary things he did and there were also times he suddenly got nerfed (not for long though) overall it is a good read but you just gotta be patient. And honestly, I read the whole thing just to see the MC's growth. The power level and transformations and the new unique skills, etc.

1yr
Doraemon_Nobita_1433
Doraemon_Nobita_1433Lv1

Super just amazing .You can enjoy each and every chapter.

1yr
Iamsupervegito
IamsupervegitoLv4

i enjoyed this fanfc but its most likely dropped svsd,fldsknflkdsnfvkldsnvkldsnvkldnlkdsnvkldsnlvndsklnvkldsnvldsknvldknvldsnvkldnvlkdsnvkldsnvkldsnvlkdsnvkldsnvlkdnvkldnslvkndsvnldkvnldksnvlkdnvkldnvldsnvlkdsnvldsnlvkndslvnldsknvlkdsnvldsknvlkdsnvldksnvldsnvldsnvldsnvldsnvldsknvlsnvdlsv

1yr
Swan_Reader
Swan_ReaderLv14

utterly TRASH why not just use Vegeta make mama's boy

1yr
Lizrock
LizrockLv4

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