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Juvenal_Alado
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2023-01-28 17:47

When you look for a fanfic to see if it improves the main character and in the end you realize that she hasn't changed at all, it even made him weaker. All of this added up to an NTR drama that wrecked the entire 20-chapter development for no plot purpose, just to satisfy the author's twisted fetishes. Well, I have no doubt that in the future the MC's father will sleep with the elf and his other girlfriends, then the author will come back and say "no, this is to show that not everything works, it will get better, believe me". There is no excuse for betrayal, whatever it may be. She only hurts, and doesn't return anything positive to the person who suffered.

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