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This is my first time writing a review, I've read until chapter 22, and I can say the story and character development is really good, the story is in slow pace and there are POV from another characters like the original novel, but its still refreshing to read because the main character is more relatable for me than the original main character and the plots is more interesting and realistic because the main character is just an ordinary otaku. Keep up the good work dear authour[img=recommend][img=update]

The story is very good, the only thing that bothered me was the lilia maid-drama. That made the story kinda meh, but still a good read. Imean he and lilia : 5 year old boy and mid 20s maid. That woulndt have worked anyway.

This is strait garbage,he developed a relationship with Lilia,just to end up in NTR. Sorry english is not my first language.

Pathetic author looking to satisfy his fetishes and offend readers, people like you should be banned from the webnovel. That's why he will never grow as an author or as a person. The story walks and materializes as NTR in chapters 21 and 22 and the author with his chipped mentality thinks that "it's not NTR" kkkkk. Tell that to the guy sleeping with your wife when you get home, or your high school sweetheart. People like you who are satisfied with the suffering of others are the worst kind. But, well, one review here nailed it, read the author's name before reading the story, it sums it up well.

There’s NTR, so that means there’s a chance for it to happen to every women thereafter, don’t recommend.

This is not a matter of age-based logic as the author regrettably tries to explain in The Betrayal Drama. It's about disrespect for the readers, but if you've lived and gone through something, you know how it hurts, how it hurts and hurts you to trust someone, give yourself, and in the end be betrayed. The author should be ashamed of what he did, he developed a good 20 chapters and in the end he decided to play with the feelings of others. This isn't GOT where people know what to expect and, it's not like this chosen plot service for narrative purpose, it just offends and hurts.

When you look for a fanfic to see if it improves the main character and in the end you realize that she hasn't changed at all, it even made him weaker. All of this added up to an NTR drama that wrecked the entire 20-chapter development for no plot purpose, just to satisfy the author's twisted fetishes. Well, I have no doubt that in the future the MC's father will sleep with the elf and his other girlfriends, then the author will come back and say "no, this is to show that not everything works, it will get better, believe me". There is no excuse for betrayal, whatever it may be. She only hurts, and doesn't return anything positive to the person who suffered.

You betrayed me. Why? You could've just NOT NTR'D Lilia but no.... I truly felt betrayed. Sorry, but I'm not going back until those chapters get a rewrite.

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