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Review Detail of Mr_Potatochu in DxD: Brimstone

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Mr_Potatochu
Mr_PotatochuLv41yrMr_Potatochu

Currently this is a DxD fic that has great potential. First of all, the main charather is a "man of God" (you'll understand when you read) and there is a lot of bible quotes which is nice The MCs process of thinking is explained instead of it being juat conclusions. Its too early to say more without spoiling but the only problem i can find for now is that there is too few chapters and no discord server for the fic.

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DxD: Brimstone

Boundless_

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Jaddaritelight
JaddaritelightLv3Jaddaritelight

So you are an atheist fanatic, so what makes you better then the guys you call religious fanatics, when you have the same problems as them? you do a jump of faith upon the believe that there is no god, you defend your religion everywhere and you attack every other religion (an intolerant pr*ck ), atheism is just the new religion of our new age(you try to attach yourself with science but most of the science of our modern world was discovered or rediscovered by religious people ), and you are acting here like atheist are some paragons of morality when atheist barely have any reason to keep morals, that can be seen from the lgbtq+ movement which is filled to the brim with p*dos and r*pist, hahahahah you come here saying religious people are murderers when the most amount of death happened because of two secular wars(ww1 and ww2) two wars that did not include religion at all, so the two biggest wars of our day and age were none religious and you still have the balls to come here and say that religious people were murders.

Nogitsune96:rant all you wanted religious fanatic of "God" his religion is full of rapists and murderers
Boundless_
Boundless_AuthorBoundless_

To celebrate your review, I’ll release a chapter and start making a discord server

Venerable_Of_Stars
Venerable_Of_StarsLv12Venerable_Of_Stars

Boundless_:To celebrate your review, I’ll release a chapter and start making a discord server
Nogitsune96
Nogitsune96Lv5Nogitsune96

it sucks I want to make a fic where my mc goes to the dimension of this mc effortlessly beat him humiliate him, torture him and destroy his faith and then give his soul to an outside god as a gift

Mr_Potatochu
Mr_PotatochuLv4Mr_Potatochu

well thats a you problem, not a me problem and who asked?

Nogitsune96:it sucks I want to make a fic where my mc goes to the dimension of this mc effortlessly beat him humiliate him, torture him and destroy his faith and then give his soul to an outside god as a gift
Boundless_
Boundless_AuthorBoundless_

I checked your profile, it explains everything

Nogitsune96:it sucks I want to make a fic where my mc goes to the dimension of this mc effortlessly beat him humiliate him, torture him and destroy his faith and then give his soul to an outside god as a gift
AngelFromSpace
AngelFromSpaceLv1AngelFromSpace

Ew don't listen to this person, it's a Hermione simp.

Nogitsune96:it sucks I want to make a fic where my mc goes to the dimension of this mc effortlessly beat him humiliate him, torture him and destroy his faith and then give his soul to an outside god as a gift
Nogitsune96
Nogitsune96Lv5Nogitsune96

rant all you wanted religious fanatic of "God" his religion is full of rapists and murderers

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Jaddaritelight
JaddaritelightLv3Jaddaritelight

We don't care about what you like, You are a d*mn simp for characters that don't exist, is that why you are here? expecting some h*nt*i fanfic about some character that you love getting f*cked by an mc that you like to put yourself in his place, go get a life before you lose yourself in your m*sturb*tion addiction you r*tard.

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AngelFromSpace
AngelFromSpaceLv1AngelFromSpace

What's wrong with that? Also, it's interesting how much you are criticising this novel without even reading it.

Nogitsune96:rant all you wanted religious fanatic of "God" his religion is full of rapists and murderers
Nogitsune96
Nogitsune96Lv5Nogitsune96

can't get past chapter 1 because of the disgust that the mc gives me

AngelFromSpace:What's wrong with that? Also, it's interesting how much you are criticising this novel without even reading it.
Nogitsune96
Nogitsune96Lv5Nogitsune96

Let's see, I'm not an atheist at all, I said that I hate the church and the "God" of the bible, it seems disrespectful to many victims when they make fic with the mc related to the church and do not show how it really is with their Father violating his nuns and raping a child that is what the church really is

Jaddaritelight:So you are an atheist fanatic, so what makes you better then the guys you call religious fanatics, when you have the same problems as them? you do a jump of faith upon the believe that there is no god, you defend your religion everywhere and you attack every other religion (an intolerant pr*ck ), atheism is just the new religion of our new age(you try to attach yourself with science but most of the science of our modern world was discovered or rediscovered by religious people ), and you are acting here like atheist are some paragons of morality when atheist barely have any reason to keep morals, that can be seen from the lgbtq+ movement which is filled to the brim with p*dos and r*pist, hahahahah you come here saying religious people are murderers when the most amount of death happened because of two secular wars(ww1 and ww2) two wars that did not include religion at all, so the two biggest wars of our day and age were none religious and you still have the balls to come here and say that religious people were murders.
AngelFromSpace
AngelFromSpaceLv1AngelFromSpace

Actually, I agree. Boundless, please add this. It will help to flesh out the main character and will make them more relatable.

Nogitsune96:Let's see, I'm not an atheist at all, I said that I hate the church and the "God" of the bible, it seems disrespectful to many victims when they make fic with the mc related to the church and do not show how it really is with their Father violating his nuns and raping a child that is what the church really is
Nogitsune96
Nogitsune96Lv5Nogitsune96

... I think you misunderstood I said that they are never mentioned but I am going to take for granted that it happens because it is the church and that has always happened and since it is not mentioned it is never punished

AngelFromSpace:Actually, I agree. Boundless, please add this. It will help to flesh out the main character and will make them more relatable.
Jaddaritelight
JaddaritelightLv3Jaddaritelight

You are being disrespectful, if you look it up the amount of kids getting r*ped in public schools is much higher, and that is in secular school without religion, and its utterly stupid to write off an entire religion just because some people did something wrong that does not represent their religion at all, and you are here claiming not to be an atheist but does have the manners of one as you speak disgusting vulgarities backed by nothing but emotion, so learn a lesson about reality and know that the media always shows the minorities and not the majorities in any group they show, so please go ahead and learn something with your life that is better then ranting like an emotional kid on the internet.

Nogitsune96:Let's see, I'm not an atheist at all, I said that I hate the church and the "God" of the bible, it seems disrespectful to many victims when they make fic with the mc related to the church and do not show how it really is with their Father violating his nuns and raping a child that is what the church really is
Nogitsune96
Nogitsune96Lv5Nogitsune96

you say few cases but it is obvious that the church has many powerful people in their pockets I am sure that many cases were silenced with threats or bribes so that they do not come to light

Jaddaritelight:You are being disrespectful, if you look it up the amount of kids getting r*ped in public schools is much higher, and that is in secular school without religion, and its utterly stupid to write off an entire religion just because some people did something wrong that does not represent their religion at all, and you are here claiming not to be an atheist but does have the manners of one as you speak disgusting vulgarities backed by nothing but emotion, so learn a lesson about reality and know that the media always shows the minorities and not the majorities in any group they show, so please go ahead and learn something with your life that is better then ranting like an emotional kid on the internet.
Jaddaritelight
JaddaritelightLv3Jaddaritelight

hahahahaha, What powerful people you are talking about? Christianity is very clearly a dying religion no matter how you look at it, If they had these powerful people in their pockets then they would not compromise with lgbtq+ and allow them to exist in the catholic church, they would not allow France to humiliate their priests by calling them all r*pist and parade them on the streets for all to see, so what kind of powerful you talking about? the pope who is a puppet that does not have power over anything? please do show me the powerful people.

Nogitsune96:you say few cases but it is obvious that the church has many powerful people in their pockets I am sure that many cases were silenced with threats or bribes so that they do not come to light
Nogitsune96
Nogitsune96Lv5Nogitsune96

The powerful are not always politicians, they are the ones who have money and also if they did it would always be very obvious sacrifices have to be made to save the best connected

Jaddaritelight:hahahahaha, What powerful people you are talking about? Christianity is very clearly a dying religion no matter how you look at it, If they had these powerful people in their pockets then they would not compromise with lgbtq+ and allow them to exist in the catholic church, they would not allow France to humiliate their priests by calling them all r*pist and parade them on the streets for all to see, so what kind of powerful you talking about? the pope who is a puppet that does not have power over anything? please do show me the powerful people.
Boundless_
Boundless_AuthorBoundless_

I’ll think about it

AngelFromSpace:Actually, I agree. Boundless, please add this. It will help to flesh out the main character and will make them more relatable.
Boundless_
Boundless_AuthorBoundless_

So every DxD fic that includes the church is disrespectful, lying, and bad if it doesn’t put an exclusive focus on the minority cases of church harassment? Makes sense to me, you might enjoy reading about p*dophilia and r*pe, looking at your comment history Also, stuff like that is included later on, not sure why you’re so fanatically criticizing something that you’ve openly admitted to never reading a single chapter of

Nogitsune96:Let's see, I'm not an atheist at all, I said that I hate the church and the "God" of the bible, it seems disrespectful to many victims when they make fic with the mc related to the church and do not show how it really is with their Father violating his nuns and raping a child that is what the church really is