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tylar94
tylar94Lv12yr
2022-11-03 09:05

I'm trying to read it but it's just so hard when it says I'm playing tricks on Quinn to track for me track the main character it just really it makes no sense and it sounds super cheesy and it's really hard to enjoy it Just keep working on it edit edit and I'll try it again when it's been updated Overall it doesn't mean a good story has great potential I'm really interested I've got to work on the dialog make it not so cheesy

Marvel God of Blood

Atrox_H
4.0
338 Chs

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Atrox_H
Atrox_HAuthor

Hello guys, sorry for the sudden break. Due to some personal problem I had to take some break for a month. Don't worry, I'll continue to post chapter form next week. As usual 1 chapter per daily. I'm gonna start stockpiling chapters from today so I can post constantly, already have about 10 chapters. See ya

1yr

Kiiiddd
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I haven't read the story I just came here to leave the GIF

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_VOIDLESS_
_VOIDLESS_Lv12

just came by to drop this gif .

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Theo_Miller
Theo_MillerLv5

The poster did a good of translating the work. The story it self is one of worest fanfic I read in while. The MC has yonug master syndrome and terminal to my enjoyment of the story. I mean a vampire that doesn’t enjoy drinking blood sure it not like your body isn’t change to point it like a drug. I’m MC I’m better then these fonder. Solid translation though good work on that.

2yr
Atrox_H
Atrox_HAuthor

Hi readers, new writer(more like poison testing Chinese translations) here. If there's any problem with grammar, lemme know. I'll also try to keep up the updates, atleast 2 chapters a day. See Ya..

2yr
Atrox_H
Atrox_HAuthor

Hello readers, Just want to know, if the writing quality has improved or not. Compared to the first 10 or so chapters. How am I doing? Is it improving or not? Also, comment if you want me to re-write the first few chapters. as I get a lot of negative comments from there. English is my second language. So lemme know if there are any grammar mistakes.

2yr
_JuneDays_oz
_JuneDays_ozLv14

The translator is a nationa treasure, and the story is alright. I won’t say it the best because if you have read any Chinese fan fic then you want I’m talking about.

2yr
Puss_slayer_4000
Puss_slayer_4000Lv14

Disappointing.

2yr
RavenClock
RavenClockLv4

Reveal spoiler

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_Morpheos_
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Reveal spoiler

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