Review Detail of CallmeGo in Pokemon: The forsaken world
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my only real problem with this story is that please use any grammar application. My eyes hurt after reading the first chapter.
Pokemon: The forsaken world
Duke_Sahib
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Duke_SahibAuthorDuke_Sahib
Now you can read the chapter yes the first chapter too made my eyes bleed when I backtracked it I hope it is better now
Duke_Sahib:well read from chapter third
CallmeGoLv5CallmeGo
So far it's alot better now the only problems left are the weird spaces within paragraphs and periods aside from that it's readable
Duke_Sahib:Tell me how it is now
Duke_SahibAuthorDuke_Sahib
well it happens when I copy it from Another app so on which I write webnovel sometimes does not save so it I had learned my lesson
CallmeGo:So far it's alot better now the only problems left are the weird spaces within paragraphs and periods aside from that it's readable