wonderful fic, tbh am shocked that i found such a well written and interesting fanfiction in webnovel of all places, had i not known that George R. R. Martin and his books exist i would have thought that this was some famous novel, not a fanfiction, although it did have a choppy start it got better nicely, and the main problem i have with it is that how "detached" the mc is, everything is mostly from a general pov rather than the MCs, and things move way too fast for us to delve into the mc's thoughts and personality, as of now, i have not once read about the mc's personal thought/ past lives/ and personal emotions, in fact, if not for the first few paragraphs of the story telling us, i would have never known that the mc had the memory of his past lives and their memories, for example, his life as a witcher, he never once talked about it, he never had thoughts about using runes or magic for example, instead of a fancition about an mc in the world house of the dragon, it feels more like a faction about house of the dragon with the mc in it, which makes it harder for us to relate to him, after all much of his personal life and thoughts have been skipped, the only other thing that people may dislike is how "perfect" the mc is and how everyone praises him, which leaves no room for actual character development, and again, this makes it even harder for us to relate to him and see him as a person with his own thoughts and emotions.
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