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Review Detail of Garland in The Bizarre Life Of Tadano

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Garland
GarlandLv41yrGarland

While its good, my main issue i just how directionless it is. It was more prominent wgen you introduced Lumine of all people. It would have been a lot better of a start of the story if it stuck with Komi and Saki since they are schoolmates and not some otherworldly person. Lumine's not even central in forcing some sort of plot like what Rukia did to Ichigo where her arrival kickstarted pretty much everything. It jist felt random not Bizarre as even Jojo had a direction of the story.

The Bizarre Life Of Tadano

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That's true, now that I think about it, yeah I should probably yeah, add some connected dots about her in the story making her appearance relevant to the story than some random encounter...