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come on guys the fanfic is actually good, give it a read you'll know what I mean with the gif below 😏

this fic is decent, the only problem that actually irk me a lot is the author ruining the money value , i mean buggy ship is worth 30 million Berry, and luffy bought some clothes for 10 million, u would expect that the clothes are super durable or high tech like germa suits, but no even buggy damaged it , luffy got some firearms for ussop at the cost of million of berries again , u would expect them to be high quality but no , the firearms got damaged in a fight against kuro lol , this problem need to be fixed , please consider this dear author, that's the only problem in this fic

This fanfic either has fake rating or the author is deleting negative reviews. Cause this fanfic does not deserve the current rating, plus it has one of the most unlikeable Mc. Mc is a hella dumb and has zero survival awareness. Doesn't give a shit about consequences and seem extremely selfish. If author delete this comment, I know for sure author is deleting comments. Also, the author also tries to make Mc seem like he doesn't give a shit about females yet has him summon all females. The author changes Shirahoshi age to 18 even though she isn't. If you are gonna have harem be blatant instead of wussing out.

I loved the novel, but the biggest flaw is Haki. The writer did not focus on Haki or give it importance, even though the most important thing in the story is Haki, because Haki develops in fights. It is the most important power in One Piece, if I were instead of Luffy The first thing I do is learn Hak

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overall this fanfic has potential we see how it go

Despite the genderbend in the first chapter, it’s still a really good read. So give it a chance. I actually like the ability to summon a good crew members from the beginnning. I like his choice of devil fruit, because it’s not a commonly used fruit. And that he is not afraid to be ruthless also helps.

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