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This fanfic either has fake rating or the author is deleting negative reviews. Cause this fanfic does not deserve the current rating, plus it has one of the most unlikeable Mc. Mc is a hella dumb and has zero survival awareness. Doesn't give a shit about consequences and seem extremely selfish. If author delete this comment, I know for sure author is deleting comments. Also, the author also tries to make Mc seem like he doesn't give a shit about females yet has him summon all females. The author changes Shirahoshi age to 18 even though she isn't. If you are gonna have harem be blatant instead of wussing out.

come on guys the fanfic is actually good, give it a read you'll know what I mean with the gif below 😏

this fic is decent, the only problem that actually irk me a lot is the author ruining the money value , i mean buggy ship is worth 30 million Berry, and luffy bought some clothes for 10 million, u would expect that the clothes are super durable or high tech like germa suits, but no even buggy damaged it , luffy got some firearms for ussop at the cost of million of berries again , u would expect them to be high quality but no , the firearms got damaged in a fight against kuro lol , this problem need to be fixed , please consider this dear author, that's the only problem in this fic

I loved the novel, but the biggest flaw is Haki. The writer did not focus on Haki or give it importance, even though the most important thing in the story is Haki, because Haki develops in fights. It is the most important power in One Piece, if I were instead of Luffy The first thing I do is learn Hak

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the writing quality on this story is above average. However, thee is little further I can say as I haven't reached far. the main reason being the biggest flaw of this story. this story has something I like to call, candy-strore mentality. It's like how if a kid was even allowed to take anything they want in a candy store. they'd take basically everything. oversaturating themselves without considering the long term benefits and cons. This manifest in this story with the main-character having two devil fruits. One is unique and interesting while the other is just there for a cool factor, it's absolutely unnecessary. and if you think that's mouthful already, he also has a system. one where he could just buy whatever. One of the most common and annoying systems I've seen in fanfic. And no, that's not all, he could also summon whoever in the world he wants, so he could have the best crew from the get go. So all I can say is it starts off too much like a child trying to fulfill their one piece fantasies, although it has potential, if the author realised and removed everything else I mentioned, I'd be great.

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