I like the way the story is going and will definitely continue to read it if it keep going in the same way. For those who are reading reviews to know about the story: MC gets a devil fruit that gives him illusion power and he uses it to develop his country.

i gonna read this and find out if it's good but I'm concerned about the comment that Zephyr made

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Is this a harem ........................?

An author reviewing his own novel ^_^. It is a One Piece fic about kingdom and territory building, as well as messing up with the plots of the original One Piece. There is also a little touch of comedy and action.

I take back what I said, the very first chapters were good until chapter 10. For me, the ones that follow after chapter 10 are absolutely not interesting. I regret giving 5 stars as a rating.

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1: let me tell everyone I reached the 4 chapter so take kind with a grind of salt 2: one promblem is don’t see how he can use his ability so well. Like he had for like a week and he almost have master control ( some context for the 3 part they guy recanted in prince that want to be a pirte. And the prince country is poor ) 3; I also have problem with the logic. the guy first thought was to make brothal right after he got caught my the mireans for his (pressoder) being a pirte but like why would the king agree at like let use logic here the king country is loseing a ton of money and then he had to pay alot to save his son from going to jail so why would even support his son into doing this and before anyone say anything his ability would not be a good excuse because the people hate him and his ilussion ability would cause people feel anything because u can’t phsivsly toach them it just get people hard and will quickly lose business if we were realistic about it.

Very nice! Keep up the good work! _________________________________ _________________________________ _________________________________ _________________________________