A good story with a lot of potential, sadly it comes out worse than it should do due to the heavy Chinese influence. I can understand if the maid and i'm willing to ignore the MC but Americans are also acting Chinese is weird and hard to follow. Now the story can be improved if it is given to a person to proof read and correct, who actually lives in the UK or USA. Also it would help to think of it as MC is from a parallel Earth and reincarnated into a AU of Marvel to make reading this easier.
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LIKEYou should say this for some people from US and such too. Some of them (not generalizing of course) think the world is about US and nothing else, and that is kinda sad. PS: Dont get me wrong, i agree with you, this is just a point i wanted to say.