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EvergreenGamingLv52yr
2022-10-12 21:24

A good story with a lot of potential, sadly it comes out worse than it should do due to the heavy Chinese influence. I can understand if the maid and i'm willing to ignore the MC but Americans are also acting Chinese is weird and hard to follow. Now the story can be improved if it is given to a person to proof read and correct, who actually lives in the UK or USA. Also it would help to think of it as MC is from a parallel Earth and reincarnated into a AU of Marvel to make reading this easier.

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Saiyan_9000
Saiyan_9000Lv4

Really I don't know what is wrong with Chinese authors always show world as if China is the place whole world revolve around and that every country follow their culture this always ruin story even when plot is good don't know how people even read their stories.

MangetsuTH
MangetsuTHLv3

You should say this for some people from US and such too. Some of them (not generalizing of course) think the world is about US and nothing else, and that is kinda sad. PS: Dont get me wrong, i agree with you, this is just a point i wanted to say.

Saiyan_9000:Really I don't know what is wrong with Chinese authors always show world as if China is the place whole world revolve around and that every country follow their culture this always ruin story even when plot is good don't know how people even read their stories.
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