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InternetSaintLv12yr
2022-10-23 09:33

Start out well and I think this could be a good story but I just can't stand how un-serious this story is. Some parts are very half assed to the point of making me want to kill myself just to escape the cringe.

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RNGesusAuthor

Please help me write better then! Join the discord and message me

DownfallstrikerX7Lv4

Not to hate but, bro explain why it's half assed and try to explain how it can improve.

InternetSaintLv1

i don't remember, I just know that the story is somewhat good but parts of it make me cringe, parts other people with a much lower taste won't mind.

DownfallstrikerX7:Not to hate but, bro explain why it's half assed and try to explain how it can improve.
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