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J_Davis_6469
J_Davis_6469Lv151yr
2024-04-16 03:18

All in all, it was not a bad story. It felt like the ending was rushed, and there were a lot of grammatical errors, but it was still a good read.

The Supreme Level Up System

ExSoldierLv99
4.5
452 Chs

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DarkSlayer
DarkSlayerLv14

Hello there! It's great to see a new creation of your. I'm just want to know, in this novel, what is the main weapon for MC? It is sword? Please change something else, I'm not saying that I hate sword. I'm just want to see something new and unique, like scyther, whip, axe, hammer, club, katar, chainsaw, drill, guns, cakram, chains, tong-fa or BRICK. I'm saying this because I have read novel that over 90% of them always have MC using swords, only just side characters that will forgotten usually use those unique weapons. I hope that I will see something new about this novel. Sorry Author, you thought it was something else, but it was just my rants!

2yr

ExSoldierLv99
ExSoldierLv99Author

This isn't a shameless review, this is a review that only has objective facts. Lol. What are you going to find in this book, dear reader? The journey of a reincarnated man that died doing his job and being a bit rreckless. For some reason, he was born with a system that granted him the Power to change classes and summon Spiritual weapond based on the classes. He is overpowered, but in that world, there are many beings that developed super human abilities due to mutation. Feel free to ask anything here.

2yr
Captain_Spoiler
Captain_SpoilerLv13

Honest reviews are here.. First of all, the "system" itself is annoying.. Why? Because the system let the MC switch his profession instead of just letting MC choose one or two professions.. For example, MC can change his profession between paladin, ninja, samurai, archer, warrior, berserker, mage, and so on.. MC can choose one profession at the time and can not use others' profession skills.. His stats like Strength, Mana, Speed, and so on are changing depending on his profession he activated at the time.. So you will be confusing the whole time because MC has MULTIPLE STATUS for us to remember everything... In the beginning, you might get annoying with the author choice of MC attitude, such as MC hates to rely on systems because it thought it not "fair" and can be considered as "cheating" (don't want to use skill given by system).. If the author wrote a story like Naruto, it will be like Naruto refuse using kyuubi power because of he think it unfair or if the author wrote One Piece, the story will be like Luffy will not using his Devil power, Gomu Gomu power to fight others because he can be considered cheating?? Lol..... Ridiculous.. You know what more ridiculous?? The king wants to celebrate his son, "the crown prince," 15th birthday, so the king makes a tournament and lets EVERYONE join it.. Who everyone? Well, basically, ANYONE.. The soldier, the Commander of the Army, the crown Prince, a hero, a 10 years old boy (MC himself), and so on.. So MC who 10 years old boy, needs to fight all veteran warriors in Coliseum.. Even in any fantasy world, who would enjoy watching the fight tournament between 10 years old boys with Pro boxing or Pro Fighter.. Who is enjoying watching the race tournament between 10 years old boy and Pro running/athlete.. Who likes to watch the quiz tournament between 10 years old boy and professors in any expertise.. I only saw 8 reviews here and all positive ones.. I kind of had high hope this novel was a gem, but now, I am disappointed and wondering, were all negative got removed because they are only 8 review here.. If my review got removed, it would prove it my suspicion is right.. but if not, then maybe I was wrong..

1yr
Santy_Melay
Santy_MelayLv1

You should give more depth and prominence to other characters, otherwise it becomes boring. Djdjufjfbfjfdbjduwusjdjfjddjuduwuejffufjjfdjdjdjfjfufujfdjjdjddjdjfjdhdhdhhddhhdhd

2yr
Rainchar_Nubz
Rainchar_NubzLv12

ABSOLUTELY MAGNIFICENT YOU ARE THE GOD OF MAGICALLY MAKING GODLY BOOKS ALL HAIL DARK SLAYER PLS TURN ME INTO A FROG AND EAT ME[img=coins]I LOVE U MY G

2yr
Ovito
OvitoLv11

It is very good to read this type of novel, and you are a great author, you have a lot of creativity, which makes you respectable. [img=recomendar]

2yr
gri_more2
gri_more2Lv1

nice story i enjoy reading it

2yr
HokageCentral
HokageCentralLv11

So far everything is great except for the world-building as I feel like we could know more than what we're told but otherwise everything else is impeccable as always

2yr
MrFalan
MrFalanLv14

Wondering how will the romance part develop I only read around 10 chapters will it be Harem type if it is is his Mom included asking cuz if so I want well written with emotion and connection unlike other novels that keeps adding people to MC's life they are veggies

2yr
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