J_Davis_6469

All in all a great story with plenty of action and adventure. The ending unfortunately did seem kind of rushed though.

I wish I could rate this higher because it had the potential to be a great story, but when you start repeating chapters to fill update qaoutas it just waste my time and money. Please fix and finish the story.

These repeat chapters are getting annoying. I'd rather read a good story from an author who takes his time and doesn't worry about chapter update speed than a story that repeats constantly.

See this! I just gifted the story: Massage chair

Thanks. can't wait

are there going to be anymore updates I do enjoy this book and have already reached the last posted chapter after reading for a week

All in all, it was not a bad story. It felt like the ending was rushed, and there were a lot of grammatical errors, but it was still a good read.

The translation here sucked but the story was good enough to get turned into an anime on crunchy roll

I loved this novel, but I need more than what was left by the ending. What happened after yin stabbed himself in the heart? What is the meaning of the system saying live and then the author stating it's too late for that. we know he's dead, but was he given the proper honor he deserved, or was there a way for yin to return through the system? So many questions left unanswered.

I'm really hoping I didn't buy the privilege just to watch it go to waste and not get any more chapters for months at a time.