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Fenris321
Fenris321Lv142yr
2022-10-27 03:30

It’s face slapping novel. Seemingly designed to be painfully generic, it does encompasses all the worst parts of the genre. The MC is an insecure brat going on a powertrip, he has a system which gives him everything, and everyone is an autistic narcissist because that’s the only people our MC can “face slap”. If you enjoy the genre then it might tide you over, but it does nothing particularly well and the glacial pace only makes it more difficult to get through (30 shopping chapters in a row).

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tortle
tortleLv3

thank you.

Jheydi327
Jheydi327Lv14

Thanks for the Reminder. ..

AshuraMikoto
AshuraMikotoLv14

its sad that youre the only one giving a real review everyone else gives it three or four and a half stars even though its bad

RealRomanLord
RealRomanLordLv3

Can you give my novel a try, Villain's Plot Reversal System

HambinoRanx
HambinoRanxLv14

"I invite you to review my story. Your words have made me feel like you can offer my story a positive step forward. I'm currently 72 chapters in, and it's a slow-burn narrative. Each Arc consists of about 7-10 chapters and features high climax points, along with a unique Spirit system. However, as a poor writer, I can't afford to have an editor review my work. If you ever find the time to read a new story, I would love to have your eyes on my work. ❤️ Thanks!"

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