Item: Reincarnated With The Undefeated System
Rating: 1
Author: A_Stevenson

A_StevensonLv141yr

2023-04-10 10:29

It is possibly the most boring novel on webnovel. Author writes like a grade schooler, at best. Sentence structure, context, and vocabulary are headache inducing. Character development is non-existent. The concept is the only good thing about this novel. If it was written by someone else, it could be great.

Reincarnated With The Undefeated System

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