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Writing quality: 2 stars At least iits readable I guess? The other is a bumbling idiot. he does not know when to zip it when it comes to describing. he repeats himself a lot and its honestly irritating especially when its coming from an author with three novels in his belt. Story development: 1 star Its bad... It's real bad... The story is slow and boring, and I could barely get through 30 chaps to make this review. The pacing reminds of watching a baby trying to walk, which is ironic since the mc seems to have been a toddler his whole life. Character Design: 1 star. Just no... mc is a baby, and all other characters are stupid. COME ONE AUTHOR! YOU'VE WRITTEN THREE BOOKS! i would give this category Zero stars if I could. Update stability: 5 stars Its good. 10 chapters a week. The problem is that despite creating so many chapters a week, its worth nothing when u write garbage. world background: 1 star The power system is atrocious. It makes no sense and its overly complicated. why use the lettering system when they can literally just say the element instead? also, the lettering system is really jumbled up. A is somehow the lowest, while D is like the second highest? what?! unique but it doesn't matter when it doesn't make sense. Overall: just bad. 2 stars don't recommend. I suggest the author drops this and starts reading novels for a change. Maybe then he will know how to make a good novel and keep it alive for longer than 15 chapters. the author deleted my last review so here is a new one.

The story starts off too slowly, and after reading ahead I can't say the payoff is worth it. The first chapter is basically an info dump telling (not showing) you how unfortunate the MC is before you even have a chance to learn more about him, much less care about him. It almost feels like the writer is trying to guilt you into pitying the character without doing the groundwork needed. There are also problems with messy punctuation, needless repetition that feels like padding, and bad vocabulary. The story is readable, but comes across as rather soulless.

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repeats same sentence over and over about being shot in the face one time is enough we don't need to read it 100 timea

It is possibly the most boring novel on webnovel. Author writes like a grade schooler, at best. Sentence structure, context, and vocabulary are headache inducing. Character development is non-existent. The concept is the only good thing about this novel. If it was written by someone else, it could be great.

grammar is bad the placements of commas are bad it's barely readable story is alright overall 4/10 i guess it wouldn't be so low if the commas weren't messed up one of such examples are "the first thing she did after entering the house was to go cuddle, little aiden" when it should be "the first thing she did after entering was to go cuddle little aiden" it may not seem like a big deal, but it's very frustrating to read and it wasn't filled with redundant sentences

It had potential but the translation with primary school writing it flopped so hard

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