Review Detail of NotAProperUsername in Cyberpunk's Singular Peculiarity

I like your work. Some of your stories are not that well written. Some characters are poorly designed. Their motives flawed and their relationships feel wrong to me. But I see small but consistent improvement through all your fics, which is much appreciated. I love the cyberpunk genre specifically the dark future storyline by Mike Pondsmith. After seeing your past works, I hope this fic will be at least on par with them, if not better than your past fics.