Item: Apotropaic of Danmachi
Rating: 4.8
Author: Abhrf

AbhrfLv31yr

2023-01-25 06:30

It's pretty entertaining. An interesting premise and an accurate story development that makes sense. Instead of jumping straight into Orario and joining the Loki/Freya/Hestia/Hepheastus familia. You actually thought out of the box and went with something different. The only fault I can find is the lack of energy/hype in some parts. Fights and important events are described without intensity so I just feel like "meh" by the end despite being able to perfectly imagine them. Though maybe that's to do with how strong they are at the current chapter?

Apotropaic of Danmachi

dancematdan

4.3

112 Chs

Liked it!

Replies3

dancematdanAuthor

Thanks for the input, perhaps it is my way of describing those things or just as you said with the power levels but if you can point me in the direction to sone good action based novels that do it well then I can try to learn how to better handle those parts.

1yr

AbhrfLv3

Any fight in Azarinth Healer will help. Especially on her first taleen dungeon since the power levels are relatively low. Free on Royal Road, though the first book is now ama.zon exclusive. Overlord (LN) Book 3 Chapter 20 I Momonga/Shaltear fight. Naruto: Murder Wizards I Tsunade and main character / Mist biju. Lord of Mysteries hits the spot too. Overlord: Reborn as an NPC for torture scenes.

dancematdan:Thanks for the input, perhaps it is my way of describing those things or just as you said with the power levels but if you can point me in the direction to sone good action based novels that do it well then I can try to learn how to better handle those parts.
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1yr

dancematdanAuthor

Abhrf:Any fight in Azarinth Healer will help. Especially on her first taleen dungeon since the power levels are relatively low. Free on Royal Road, though the first book is now ama.zon exclusive. Overlord (LN) Book 3 Chapter 20 I Momonga/Shaltear fight. Naruto: Murder Wizards I Tsunade and main character / Mist biju. Lord of Mysteries hits the spot too. Overlord: Reborn as an NPC for torture scenes.

1yr

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dancematdanAuthor

Shameless self review, this is another novel which I came up with on a whim after bingeing Danmachi. While it was intended to be a one off book with only three chapters, I have continued it and will release a chapter every five days if I can keep up with the releases. I have other novels with different releases per week so I cannot afford the time to proofread and edit them so those that are critical on grammer, spelling or minor mistakes, please be patient and give the story a chance. Kan-Gar-Chu (one piece fanfic) - 1 chapter everyday in the week and 1 extra on a sunday so 8 a week. Pi-Gar-Chu (one piece fanfic) - 3 chapters a week Bombyx: Return of the Vengeful First Daughter (Original) - 1+ chapters a week depending on my motivation Dr who is where again? (dragon ball fanfic) - 2 chapters a week Renegade Jenny (Pokémon fanfic) - 1 chapter every 4 days Although I am working on many different projects, I still believe that I can make time and not fall behind but you can always be updated on any changes on my discord.

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The author probably knows who I am since I helped with his discord, Anyways it's a 5 stars from me since I hope they'll continue this if I help out and promote dancematdan's discord also I like the start so far.

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CelectraLv4

Will the MC ever go to Orario, since that is where all the stories begin?

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GeshaKunLv4

Great writing by an Amazing Author. Please do continue for this one shall also do their best to shower Author-san with stones.

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I dont understand why this fic even takes places in danmachi.

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