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ShadowScribeLv141yr
2023-10-16 08:30

I like the story but it can be difficult to read. The pace for reading is very slow due to how much repetition fills the paragraphs between dialogue. Events that should feel intense or at least interesting fade to the background of half a dozen paragraphs of repeating what could be said in a few sentences until the events resume

Apotropaic of Danmachi

dancematdan
4.3
112 Chs

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dancematdan
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Shameless self review, this is another novel which I came up with on a whim after bingeing Danmachi. While it was intended to be a one off book with only three chapters, I have continued it and will release a chapter every five days if I can keep up with the releases. I have other novels with different releases per week so I cannot afford the time to proofread and edit them so those that are critical on grammer, spelling or minor mistakes, please be patient and give the story a chance. Kan-Gar-Chu (one piece fanfic) - 1 chapter everyday in the week and 1 extra on a sunday so 8 a week. Pi-Gar-Chu (one piece fanfic) - 3 chapters a week Bombyx: Return of the Vengeful First Daughter (Original) - 1+ chapters a week depending on my motivation Dr who is where again? (dragon ball fanfic) - 2 chapters a week Renegade Jenny (Pokémon fanfic) - 1 chapter every 4 days Although I am working on many different projects, I still believe that I can make time and not fall behind but you can always be updated on any changes on my discord.

2yr

UndeadBeing
UndeadBeingLv12

The author probably knows who I am since I helped with his discord, Anyways it's a 5 stars from me since I hope they'll continue this if I help out and promote dancematdan's discord also I like the start so far.

2yr
Celectra
CelectraLv4

Will the MC ever go to Orario, since that is where all the stories begin?

1yr
GeshaKun
GeshaKunLv4

Great writing by an Amazing Author. Please do continue for this one shall also do their best to shower Author-san with stones.

2yr
Someone_was_here
Someone_was_hereLv14

I just read up to chapter 5 (the latest) but it has a good development and from how I see it will have a different development from others fanfics.

2yr
GreyKnights
GreyKnightsLv14

the story is good but there is a bit too much info-dump

1yr
The_last_Guardin
The_last_GuardinLv15

I dont understand why this fic even takes places in danmachi.

1yr
darric_wiblin
darric_wiblinLv4

can you please update your danmachi story

4mth
TheCartoonist
TheCartoonistLv1

It's a fresh read from all the things here in WN

1yr
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