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OukisLips
OukisLipsLv151yr
2023-02-05 00:14

Not very good. The author seems not only very inexperienced in writing, but also inexperienced in life. A lot of things written will seem nonsensical to anyone with any life experience...

Games Of Thrones: The Lost Hero (ENG)

BLACK_HOUSE
3.6
70 Chs

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BLACK_HOUSE
BLACK_HOUSEAuthor

oh really??? Although I don't care about your opinion, Mr. Expert, thank you for your important review that we are all going to appreciate.

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DetectiveHarem
DetectiveHaremLv14

hahaha usually people who brag about having a lot of life experience are the ones that do not have a lot of life experience

1yr
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TheOneBelow
TheOneBelowLv13

you shouldn't really set the bar high, lots of author in Webnovel are new or they just write for fun. On instances like this you should just shut up if you have nothing good to say.

1yr
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Deadrule_vivek
Deadrule_vivekLv5

life experience ? tf ? are you a kid or something ? who talks about life experience when it's about a fanfic of a fantasy world ? what kind of life experience do you even have ?

1yr
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OukisLips
OukisLipsLv15

It’s called a review. The purpose is to let other readers know whether a story is good or bad and why so that they can either invest their time or avoid wasting their time. I don’t think what I wrote strayed from that purpose

TheOneBelow:you shouldn't really set the bar high, lots of author in Webnovel are new or they just write for fun. On instances like this you should just shut up if you have nothing good to say.
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SaikoYonebayashi
SaikoYonebayashiLv11

At least tell the author to correct the use of "he" and "she" properly , it's always the other way -_-

TheOneBelow:you shouldn't really set the bar high, lots of author in Webnovel are new or they just write for fun. On instances like this you should just shut up if you have nothing good to say.
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Rav_Zoldyck
Rav_ZoldyckLv4

are Elia and ashara in harem

BLACK_HOUSE:oh really??? Although I don't care about your opinion, Mr. Expert, thank you for your important review that we are all going to appreciate.
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DetachedDreamer
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The story isn't horrible for what it is. A mash of clichéd game of throne fanfic elements fused together while still trying to find its own unique pathway to take. some people like cliche. emotional situations fall short but that can improve as the authors writing and English improve. there's a decent story in here if the quality increase in future chapters. Also, The systems seems very vague and op basically just fitting to the users wants which is definitely a negative. other than that I'd say give the story a try you might like it.

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Monarch_freereader
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the plot is going good and this is another GOT fanfic that has future prospect. coming from the perspective of a free reader. I hope the author won't drop this. thank you for the latest 10chapters and it's all great. praying for your mental health 👌😊✌️

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Genesis_999
Genesis_999Lv2

Ohh yeah this trash lol tch thought it was some new got fanfic and got excited for nothing sigh œœ[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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Humbuub
HumbuubLv4

The system is too OP. I don't like that it's sentient. It also knows things the MC doesn't know, so the MC just have to ask it and voila, who needs spies or an info network right? The quests don't make sense, it's just Kill this, save that. I mean that may not sound that bad, but what if thE MC is a 4 yo and the target to save is thousands of miles away? The dialogue is also ridiculous, the first time he saw Oberyn, no Hi or Hello, he jumped to "your sister and her children would be killed". That's so cringe, he's asking to be killed ffs.

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Edwing_Vargas_3814
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Reveal spoiler

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BLACK_HOUSE
BLACK_HOUSEAuthor

Like any shameless author I give myself 5 stars because I like how I carry my story, although I'm a novice in creating fanfics, I hope you like my story.

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Simon_Pelle_Hansen
Simon_Pelle_HansenLv13

The story is good but it isnt written well. The sentence structure is really bad, the plot and such is fine imo since it is a fanfic, but the grammar/overall structure is so bad sometimes that it just takes you out of the narrative. Get a proof reader and this might be a 4/5 star story. Btw I got to chapter 23 before stopping. Plot (spoiler) Decently op mc but not to the point where he could just instakill night king and be done with it. Slow story but not to slow. Starts just before roberts rebillion with the usual saving of some characters

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