Good concept, but the story is all over the place. Contradictory settings, the characters change their decisions from one paragraph to the other without reason or logic, the MC and the FL don't really communicate with each other. Temporal line is a mess, spacial details are nonexistent. Spoilers ahead. When MC arrives to the elven territory, a barren land where nothing grows, there is a famine ongoing and they are in the brink of death. A couple of years later there are forests, food surplus, and it seems the elves are ready to conquer the world. There are no males but there are children. Less than a thousand. So, how is it? The dialogues are ridiculous. The concept behind magic is ignored and goes unexplained. And this is just the start. I guess the early chapters need to engage the readers fast, but everything here is just sloppy.
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in chapter 4, the author clearly states that the dark elves can turn the barren land fertile and quickly grow crops because of the magic they learned from the MC. if you continue reading through chapter 5, you'll realize that the forest is at the border of the dark elves' territory and the trees there are withered with the place being described as somewhere even grass won't grow.
