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John_Ryan_8278
John_Ryan_8278Lv122yr
2022-10-11 02:38

it's good but ultimate it is too early to judge it properly but I like the mc and the father but I feel it is a bit rushed but that is understandable considering it is a fanfiction that has not yet got to the fanfictiony bits yet the only thing that sticks out to me as really rushed or forced would be the conflict about some food or something and how the father who was acting very close to his daughter didn't even give her a chance to explain her self and he just gave her to someone else and he ask his dead wife where he went wrong like idk maybe giving someone else your daughter might be a good point overall its good I just hope the author stays away from all this unnecessary drama that doesn't make much sense as I said tho it is good and I only was negative about this part of the story cuz that the only really bad part

Is it wrong to be a Shrine Maiden Kitsune in a Dungeon?

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