Nice start. The book has potential. There are some errors here and there but it is readable. Need a little bit of rereading and this will become a masterpiece. Has high potential. Explain a little more power level and methods to obtain it. That's all. waiting for more chapters.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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