I see great potential in this storyline with some minor fixing with the dialogue but that's no big deal. Overall, Grammer is flawless. I see this novel being a new shining star. It's something different to read compared to what you normally find here. I highly recommend this story to anybody looking for something new, fresh, and entertaining. Keep up the great work Author ♥️♥️♥️ I'm excited to be your first fan and supporter!!!
SumaTheCreative
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LIKESumaTheCreative:Ohh!! Thank you So much Author..I am so thankful and glad that you are my first fan and supporter and even first person to comment....😁🥰 And once again thanks a lot.. Never in my life I thought Someone would actually read my story. Thank you for your Support Author☺