Item: Skyrim: The Snow Prince (an Elder Scrolls Fanfic)
Rating: 4
Author: DetachedDreamer

DetachedDreamerLv142yr

2023-02-01 06:39

I love Elder scrolls and any fanfics about them. this one has an awesome origin and I'm excited to see how the story develops. However, every chapter is about 40 to 60% just an info dump about the history. it was nice at first and still appreciable but there hasn't been really much actual story. 19 chapters in and it feels like it should only be the 3rd or 4th chapter for the MC. If this changes I'll definitely revise my review for the better but this and the update speed are lacking at the moment. other than that, the story is topnotch and id recommend anyone to read this even non elder scrolls enthusiasts as the info supplied every chapter should fill you in on what you are missing.

Skyrim: The Snow Prince (an Elder Scrolls Fanfic)

Knight_Riku

4.0

73 Chs

Liked by 2 people

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Knight_RikuAuthor

the foe the review, u should be ready to revise ur review then cause only about 3 more information dump Chapters or maybe even 1 left and then u can proceed with a story that is 1000 chapters long and as of now I am picking up on the story update speed by doing 1 Chapter a day at the very least. tbh, 20 chapters of info dump at the start is much better for new readers to set a foundation as well as explaining the Thalmor plot and some racial lore since barely any players actually know them cause of Elder Scrolls massive lore. hope I answered any doubts and questions u might have had

2yr

DetachedDreamerLv14

definitely, ill revise my review for sure thanks for the info!

Knight_Riku:the foe the review, u should be ready to revise ur review then cause only about 3 more information dump Chapters or maybe even 1 left and then u can proceed with a story that is 1000 chapters long and as of now I am picking up on the story update speed by doing 1 Chapter a day at the very least. tbh, 20 chapters of info dump at the start is much better for new readers to set a foundation as well as explaining the Thalmor plot and some racial lore since barely any players actually know them cause of Elder Scrolls massive lore. hope I answered any doubts and questions u might have had

2yr

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